Camille Beck Poet Free verse

Blue

She says,
'Forty in blue
Are you.'
And he looks past her, on the winter.

She says,
'Forty in blue
Are you.'
And he looks past her, out to the street.

She says,
'Forty in blue
Are you.'
And he looks past her, on the winter.

She says,
'You are Forty, and gently you are complete.'

She says,
'You are sky',
And he says,
'You leave me none.'

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Beata Agustin September 16, 2026 at 11:48 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 26, 2016 at 9:29 PM Camille Beck, you've expressed yourself well, I like the way you ended the poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Happy Easter ** LOVE LINDA

Skat A August 10, 2015 at 6:53 PM CAMILLE, a wonderful read.... LOVE *SKAT*