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Blue

Turquoise eyes shed tears

Salty drops blend in blue sea

Tiny ripples spread

Sunset casts lone silhouette

One woman, heartbroken, blue

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 29, 2011 at 5:24 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in the contest Carolyn. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

June 5, 2011 at 8:34 PM

this one sure looks familar. And a great win for a great poem. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

June 5, 2011 at 4:37 PM

me & you...[sigh] so many lonely people and still we/she/he don't meet? ODD yes? Congrad's Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick

June 5, 2011 at 11:04 AM

Hey you..congrats again...this is beautiful.. sad and lovely...BG

Phyllis Babcock

March 7, 2011 at 10:32 AM

Nice poem. Yes, it takes guts for a man to stand up and go against the grain. He did save a lot of lives but look what he got for that. He did the right thing and I hope he runs a good political race. You know he will stand up for what he believes and that is a good trait to have. love phhyl

Ravindra K Kapoor

February 23, 2011 at 7:28 PM

A well deserving win of this brilliant piece of Poem. Congratulations for your win my friend. Definitely a Gem like Poem from a kind and wonderful poet. Sorry I could not see it earlier. Love and best wishes....Ravindra.....Carolyn Devonshire

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 23, 2011 at 12:12 PM

Congratulations on your win in Francine Roberts's contest "Blue". A well deserved win Carolyn. Love, Carol

Anna-Marie Docherty

February 21, 2011 at 11:00 PM

nicely thought out, congratulations on your desrved win...

Carol Fillmore

February 15, 2011 at 4:08 PM

Congratulations on your win, Carolyn, well deserved indeed:)

Francesca Redlich

February 15, 2011 at 10:55 AM

Very evocative.

Gwendolen Song

February 14, 2011 at 1:13 AM

I have had a cry similar to the one described in your poem. I pray your heart is now mended. Beautiful description and I bet your eyes are also. Bless U

Debbie Guzzi

February 11, 2011 at 5:30 PM

Yes I could see we were on the same tac Congrad's Light & Love

Michael J. Falotico

February 11, 2011 at 3:08 PM

A great win for you my dear Carolyn!!!!! Rosanna and I lost our child many years ago.. But your words are well taken.. Its is nice to write about it...thank you for being so sweet..love Michael