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Blue - Dodoitsu Contest

big blue eyes pierced my soul took away all resistance knees buckled at his touch I belonged to him blonde hair, blue eyes, dimpled smile are enough to melt one's heart one touch was all it took babies first cuddle.

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Date: 11/28/2015 1:39:00 PM
Like this Dodoitsu Seren, Lovely dimples, blonde hair and big blue eyes, adorable!! A nice touch!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 11/28/2015 8:53:00 AM
Very good Seren! I think I understand the form and this is done to a t Best wishes, Keith 7
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Date: 11/28/2015 8:00:00 AM
love it, love you adding to my favs.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/28/2015 8:49:00 AM
Hi great to see you again, gladyou liked my own .....Seren
Date: 11/28/2015 6:42:00 AM
this is cute Seren...my youngest daughter is my only child with a dimple and it is so adorable
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Seren Roberts
Date: 11/28/2015 8:48:00 AM
My friends have young babies they are adorable....Seren

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