Blow Sweet Breeze

With the turning of the green
the fevered hues engulf my soul
rich radiant reds glistening in the sun
as my heart gleams with memories
of the solemn words that fall from
your angelic lips.
The ornate orange and dynamic yellows
come to life
like those sparkling flecks dancing
inside your autumn eyes. Oh my heart
my heart, rest my heart.
Breathless the breeze blows a subtle scent
of sweets from the pink flowing Amaryllis.
Blow sweet breeze blow  off into the night
and on your wings I plant my kiss. A loving kiss
filled with the finest fruits of my harvest like the
finest bottle of red served on the terrace overlooking
the Grande Canal in Venice under a moonlit sky.
Blow sweet breeze blow and onto her veranda swirl
swirl gently into her palatial palace and wrap my love
firmly upon her waiting cheek.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Shaw Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 2:00 AM
This poem is dope. Kinda hard to read with the lack or periods. So I tried to read it the same way it was written. And the outcome was amazing. The vocabulary painted such a vivid image. I loved it. keep on writing!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Great piece, oozes of high romance, exceptional effort Tim Keith
Krampe Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Beautiful imagery and rich sounds - wonderful, Tim. Agnes
Baumgarn Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 10:56 PM
I love nostalgic writes like this one, Tim. Thanks so much for making my night at work.
Vaso Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 12:07 AM
I saw POTD here congrats!!! :)
Eastman Avatar
September 22, 2016 at 1:35 PM
An amazingly beautiful love poem... You're still the King!
La France Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Tim, oh so beautifully penned, I LOVE your write~
Scars Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:22 AM
So romantic Tim...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Callus Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:54 AM
This poem is beautiful, and like a romantic scented breeze it will find its way to her heart. Congrats on p.o.t.d. // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 2:43 AM
A visual harvest feast Tim in dripping with the blooming colors of autumn romance! Beautiful! Congratulations on POTD! 7 ; )
Lamoureux Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Love wins the day, congrats Tim!
A  Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 10:16 PM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "ROSES STINK." Celebrate with me. **SKAT**
Manassian Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 4:32 AM
What an awesome poem, Tim. I loved the line about the flecks in her eyes. Those kinds of eyes definitely mesmerize. Great write. I'm glad this got the POTD.
Kalicharan Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 1:12 AM
A lovely, romantic piece... congrats...
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Way to go Tim, congrats on POTD.
Cheyney Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Potd, nice job.
Scars Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Congrats Tim on this wonderful well deserving win for POTD! :)-luloo
Smith Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments.
Andresen Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 2:36 PM
- A lovely poem, Tim :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deb Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 1:48 PM
So romantic and lovely piece of write ! congrats dear.
Allison Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:57 AM
dropping by with my congrats on POTD Tim you are king of romance my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Darling Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:57 AM
A 7 for me!
Darling Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:56 AM
That was so so so sweet!! You are very talented!
Dalei Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Wonderful write Tim. Well desrving POTD. A big caongrats from me. A7 & a fav from me......// hugs........// Manmath......
Yvonne Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations bro!
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