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Blow sweet Breeze

With the turning of the green
the fevered hues engulf my soul
rich radiant reds glistening in the sun
as my heart gleams with memories
of the solemn words that fall from
your angelic lips.
The ornate orange and dynamic yellows
come to life
like those sparkling flecks dancing
inside your autumn eyes. Oh my heart
my heart, rest my heart.
Breathless the breeze blows a subtle scent
of sweets from the pink flowing Amaryllis.
Blow sweet breeze blow  off into the night
and on your wings I plant my kiss. A loving kiss
filled with the finest fruits of my harvest like the
finest bottle of red served on the terrace overlooking
the Grande Canal in Venice under a moonlit sky.
Blow sweet breeze blow and onto her veranda swirl
swirl gently into her palatial palace and wrap my love
firmly upon her waiting cheek.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/16/2016 2:00:00 AM
This poem is dope. Kinda hard to read with the lack or periods. So I tried to read it the same way it was written. And the outcome was amazing. The vocabulary painted such a vivid image. I loved it. keep on writing!
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Date: 10/14/2016 10:01:00 AM
Great piece, oozes of high romance, exceptional effort Tim Keith
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Date: 10/12/2016 3:50:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and rich sounds - wonderful, Tim. Agnes
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Date: 9/28/2016 10:56:00 PM
I love nostalgic writes like this one, Tim. Thanks so much for making my night at work.
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Date: 9/24/2016 12:07:00 AM
I saw POTD here congrats!!! :)
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Date: 9/22/2016 1:35:00 PM
An amazingly beautiful love poem... You're still the King!
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Date: 9/21/2016 11:11:00 AM
Tim, oh so beautifully penned, I LOVE your write~
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Date: 9/21/2016 8:22:00 AM
So romantic Tim...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/21/2016 7:54:00 AM
This poem is beautiful, and like a romantic scented breeze it will find its way to her heart. Congrats on p.o.t.d. // paul
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Date: 9/21/2016 2:43:00 AM
A visual harvest feast Tim in dripping with the blooming colors of autumn romance! Beautiful! Congratulations on POTD! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/20/2016 9:15:00 AM
Love wins the day, congrats Tim!
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Date: 9/19/2016 10:16:00 PM
Hi Tim, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "ROSES STINK." Celebrate with me. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/19/2016 4:32:00 AM
What an awesome poem, Tim. I loved the line about the flecks in her eyes. Those kinds of eyes definitely mesmerize. Great write. I'm glad this got the POTD.
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Date: 9/19/2016 1:12:00 AM
A lovely, romantic piece... congrats...
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Date: 9/18/2016 7:37:00 PM
Way to go Tim, congrats on POTD.
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Date: 9/18/2016 5:05:00 PM
Potd, nice job.
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Date: 9/18/2016 4:52:00 PM
Congrats Tim on this wonderful well deserving win for POTD! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/18/2016 4:26:00 PM
Thanks everyone for the wonderful comments.
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Date: 9/18/2016 2:36:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Tim :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/18/2016 1:48:00 PM
So romantic and lovely piece of write ! congrats dear.
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:57:00 AM
A 7 for me!
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:57:00 AM
dropping by with my congrats on POTD Tim you are king of romance my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:56:00 AM
That was so so so sweet!! You are very talented!
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Date: 9/18/2016 11:08:00 AM
Wonderful write Tim. Well desrving POTD. A big caongrats from me. A7 & a fav from me......// hugs........// Manmath......
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Date: 9/18/2016 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations bro!
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