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He loved,but could not say such words,he could not find; He loved,but could not touch such warmth,was just too much; He was proud,but could not praise such sounds he could not raise; He supported,but not with words such feelings,witheld unheard; Sentiment,tight reined within banished,unvoiced by him, embittered by his own hurt, a scarred child 'neath his hairshirt. In the past,his crippled emotions lay imprisoned,unsaid,'til his dying day. Emotion=Inhibition

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/27/2011 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Emote" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/22/2011 8:17:00 PM
You definitely captured the emotion here, Brian-- how sad sometimes how trying to rein in our emotions keep us from living... way to go for being among the winners :)
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Date: 6/22/2011 4:17:00 PM
I have heard some poets and others complain that their fathers never told them they were loved. I suspect this answers the why of him. Congratulations Brian. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/22/2011 4:01:00 PM
It's sad that so many people hide their feelings this way. You picked an interesting emotion to explore in verse, Brian. I have written on this theme as well, but not for this contest. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:49:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your HM in the Emote contest with this beautiful entry luv..enjoy special honor..
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Date: 6/22/2011 3:11:00 PM
Congrad's on your win Brian, this was such a hard voyage, you are still with us dear perhaps try to "let go" we are old now we can be as foolish as we want yes?? Light & Love
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Date: 3/20/2010 8:41:00 PM
Beautiful poetry here and have a great weeekend. :)
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Date: 3/20/2010 6:50:00 PM
I thought that was a good poem
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:56:00 PM
You are a very keen observer of one's silent sufferings in life. A1 for this, Brian. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/19/2010 6:54:00 PM
Expressed well Brian .. your words allow the reader to absorb the subjects pain and struggle.. another thought provoking gem ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/19/2010 6:58:00 AM
What a sad way to live one's life. WEll expressed. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/19/2010 2:25:00 AM
Unfortunately Brian, there are many, who since childhood have found it difficult, and yes even impossible to express their feelings. Children reared in homes without hugs, homes without expressions of love, with emotions maintained, but not flourishing, often grow up to be crippled adults...unless they are fortunate along life's path to find someone willing to teach them the good side of life...and the courage to express without fear of rejections. Excellent poetry, Brian. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/18/2010 5:52:00 PM
Sounds like the provider...One who feels that love is providing..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/18/2010 4:50:00 PM
Truely...unbearable to feel so....where there's life there's hope. I think the verse is stronger without the last 2 lines. or perhaps His crippled emotions lay imprisoned until his dying day. I enjoyed this write and know many have felt so and it's nice to know one's not alone.
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