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blossoms gather below the boughs... pink cabochons

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Date: 5/16/2014 9:04:00 PM
Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Connie
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:40:00 PM
I truly enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 5/16/2014 5:14:00 PM
I didn't know the word either...looked it up..great haiku and I learned something too. congrats. BG
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/16/2014 8:41:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement in your contest Debbie. I will change the ellipsis. Blessings, Connie
Date: 5/16/2014 4:51:00 PM
I must tell you I was so happy to such a fine image with so few syllables & NO title [you want your ellipsis like this Connie ... see dif?] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/16/2014 8:42:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement in your contest Debbie. I will change the ellipsis. Blessings, Connie
Date: 5/16/2014 12:26:00 PM
what a remarkable image, cabochons - new word in my vocab. Looked it up and it's a perfect match. Congratulations, Connie!!
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! Lori
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:41:00 AM
Love the imagery in your poem "pink cabochons". Best wishes Linda x
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Date: 5/15/2014 9:12:00 PM
Connie, you came in fourth with this. BIG congrats. I am so proud of you for winning with this cute haiku.
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Date: 4/14/2014 4:40:00 AM
Beautiful poem; love the imagery; I have a soft spot for short poems such as this delightful haiku! // paul
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Date: 8/22/2013 10:46:00 AM
Great touch, the pink cabochons - a fine word to set the scene. Love, daver
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daver austin
Date: 8/22/2013 10:48:00 AM
I just discovered I'd read the poem before. This second time, though, was a new revelation. Great stuff, Connie. Love, daver
Date: 5/9/2013 1:37:00 PM
Excellent haiku. Very well written~A.O
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Date: 5/2/2013 2:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Connie! I had to look up cabochons as well! Lovely haiku. :) Thanks for your visit to my work.
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Date: 5/2/2013 12:45:00 AM
I admittedly had to look up cabochons, but wow what a pretty image! A lot of people give away what the haiku is all about in the titles. I like how your title is simply the first line, so nothing gets spoiled.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/16/2014 4:48:00 PM
yup the using a title on a haiku is like cheating with an extra card up your sleeve
Date: 4/30/2013 4:40:00 PM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara
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Date: 4/30/2013 4:16:00 PM
Your Haiku has a real cutesy ring to it. Your welcome Connie!
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Date: 4/30/2013 2:03:00 PM
Nice images
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Date: 4/30/2013 12:19:00 PM
Cabochons. Here is a new word for me. Like the sparkling way you use it. Congrats on your lifetime membership. Love, daver
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 4/30/2013 4:26:00 PM
Thanks a lot Dave. Now I just need more time to read and reply. Love reading the posts here at Poetry Soup. Love, Connie
Date: 4/30/2013 10:26:00 AM
very nicely said! Laura
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Date: 4/30/2013 9:13:00 AM
Like it connie
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Date: 4/30/2013 8:58:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/25/2013 8:35:00 PM
Just wonderful Connie!It is a delight to read your poetry.Congrats on the win.
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Date: 4/23/2013 10:09:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Connie...thak you for sharing
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Date: 4/22/2013 6:52:00 PM
Connie, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2013 1:35:00 PM
Connie congratulation on your winning Haiku. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 4/21/2013 8:20:00 AM
Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Connie! I really love your great haiku! I knew from the start that this will win. Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora
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