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Blossoms Gather

blossoms gather
below the boughs...
pink cabochons

autumnnatureplacesspringhaiku

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Dr.Ram Mehta

May 16, 2014 at 9:04 PM

Great haiku. Congratulations on the win, Connie

Ivor Kos

May 16, 2014 at 7:40 PM

I truly enjoyed this piece.

Barbara Gorelick

May 16, 2014 at 5:14 PM

I didn't know the word either...looked it up..great haiku and I learned something too. congrats. BG

Connie Marcum Wong

May 16, 2014 at 8:41 PM

Thank you very much for my placement in your contest Debbie. I will change the ellipsis. Blessings, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

May 16, 2014 at 4:51 PM

I must tell you I was so happy to such a fine image with so few syllables & NO title [you want your ellipsis like this Connie ... see dif?] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Connie Marcum Wong

May 16, 2014 at 8:42 PM

Thank you very much for my placement in your contest Debbie. I will change the ellipsis. Blessings, Connie

Reason A. Poteet

May 16, 2014 at 12:26 PM

what a remarkable image, cabochons - new word in my vocab. Looked it up and it's a perfect match. Congratulations, Connie!!

Lori Lucas Mcclure

May 16, 2014 at 7:42 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win! Lori

Linda Jackson

May 16, 2014 at 7:41 AM

Love the imagery in your poem "pink cabochons". Best wishes Linda x

Andrea Dietrich

May 15, 2014 at 9:12 PM

Connie, you came in fourth with this. BIG congrats. I am so proud of you for winning with this cute haiku.

Paul Callus

April 14, 2014 at 4:40 AM

Beautiful poem; love the imagery; I have a soft spot for short poems such as this delightful haiku! // paul

Daver Austin

August 22, 2013 at 10:46 AM

Great touch, the pink cabochons - a fine word to set the scene. Love, daver

Daver Austin

August 22, 2013 at 10:48 AM

I just discovered I'd read the poem before. This second time, though, was a new revelation. Great stuff, Connie. Love, daver

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

May 9, 2013 at 1:37 PM

Excellent haiku. Very well written~A.O

Eileen Manassian

May 2, 2013 at 2:56 PM

Congratulations on your win, Connie! I had to look up cabochons as well! Lovely haiku. :) Thanks for your visit to my work.

Timothy Hicks

May 2, 2013 at 12:45 AM

I admittedly had to look up cabochons, but wow what a pretty image! A lot of people give away what the haiku is all about in the titles. I like how your title is simply the first line, so nothing gets spoiled.

Debbie Guzzi

May 16, 2014 at 4:48 PM

yup the using a title on a haiku is like cheating with an extra card up your sleeve

Sara Kendrick

April 30, 2013 at 4:40 PM

Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara

Ayesha Karim

April 30, 2013 at 4:16 PM

Your Haiku has a real cutesy ring to it. Your welcome Connie!

Andrew Totten

April 30, 2013 at 2:03 PM

Nice images

Daver Austin

April 30, 2013 at 12:19 PM

Cabochons. Here is a new word for me. Like the sparkling way you use it. Congrats on your lifetime membership. Love, daver

Connie Marcum Wong

April 30, 2013 at 4:26 PM

Thanks a lot Dave. Now I just need more time to read and reply. Love reading the posts here at Poetry Soup. Love, Connie

Laura Mckenzie

April 30, 2013 at 10:26 AM

very nicely said! Laura

Judy Konos

April 30, 2013 at 9:13 AM

Like it connie

Ndaba Sibanda

April 30, 2013 at 8:58 AM

Beautiful poem. Congratulations!

Kash Poet

April 25, 2013 at 8:35 PM

Just wonderful Connie!It is a delight to read your poetry.Congrats on the win.

Joseph May

April 23, 2013 at 10:09 AM

congrats on a fine win Connie...thak you for sharing

Poet Destroyer A

April 22, 2013 at 6:52 PM

Connie, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA

Connie Gildersleeve

April 21, 2013 at 1:35 PM

Connie congratulation on your winning Haiku. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

Len Gasun

April 21, 2013 at 8:20 AM

Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear friend Connie! I really love your great haiku! I knew from the start that this will win. Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora

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