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Blossoms and Bubbles

Effervescent laughter blows over vales
then falls soft to glaze new blooms posed genteel.
Gracious stems lift smiles to foamed skies surreal,
riding on sunrays of shimmery sails.

Splendid dreams bubble up from blossoms bright,
a sparkling scene as petals parade ‘round.
Cushioned on spring breeze, love waits to be found;
warm thoughts of you fly then burst in midflight.

Light bubbles join hands to soar through puffed clouds
winking at flowers in latest spring styles.
Their joy christens lands once silent for miles;
orbs popping with flair in breath’s blooming shrouds.

Laughter lifts skyward, an aerated tale,
of bubbles blown high above blooming vale.

3/25/15 for Olive's Blossoms and Bubbles Contest      

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Date: 4/18/2015 5:46:00 PM
Rhonda, Congratulations on your awesome BLOSSOMS AND BUBBLES win.... XOX .... ~Linda~
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Date: 4/14/2015 1:14:00 AM
cheering loud and clear for this superb piece, rhonda... a bouquet of congrats to you!
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Date: 4/13/2015 12:32:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem, Rhonda! Loved it. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/13/2015 12:04:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Rhonda! Filled with effervescent joy! Congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:57:00 PM
very very nice one, Rhonda. I see how it took first place. Congrats. Ummm, that Hairy Fairy poem? It took me a good five hours. Two to research all homophones and line up rhyming ones. Two to assemble the poem and an hour to check and recheck. I still am not sure i got it all down. And after all that, I probably won't win. Soupmail.
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:41:00 PM
Yay, congrats Rhonda :)
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Date: 4/12/2015 7:12:00 PM
congratulations my poetic friend, I knew this one was going to be hard to beat, you do sonnets well
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Date: 4/12/2015 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Rhonda great sonnet
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Date: 4/12/2015 3:26:00 PM
such wonderful imagery in your delightful sonnet - so glad to see this at the top of the podium:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/12/2015 2:36:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, the scene is so vivid in my mind. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:00:00 AM
Wow! My heartfelt congratulations to you for your top of the podium win for this lovely poem! Such a dreamy image of blossoms and bubbles. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:46:00 AM
This cannot help but lift the spirit !! A lovely winning poem ! Congratulations to you, Rhonda !!
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:38:00 AM
AH Rhonda, my favorite line "Light bubbles join hands to soar through puffed clouds". Congrats on the top spot. A well deserved placement and a 7 from me.
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful imagery plus the good flow this enhanced the magical dreamy lines you did. I so like the 3rd stanza esp the last line… :) YOU got it all what we want as 3 judges hence you are my TOP SPOT--1ST:Thank you and CONGRATULATIONS! hugs//olive eloisa... :)!!!
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Date: 4/12/2015 9:34:00 AM
the lines with the words shimmery sails, cushioned on spring breeze and orbs popping!!! WOW!!!!! i love them!!... :D!!
Date: 3/28/2015 7:12:00 PM
It occurs to me that you are that rare blossom with that unique bubbly personality. Just saying!
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Date: 3/28/2015 7:10:00 PM
Sometimes I don't need many words to express my feelings...A Fav!
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:37:00 PM
You have caught the essence of our dear Olive in this beautiful poetry, rhonda. she is gonna love this!
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Date: 3/26/2015 10:08:00 AM
Such a lovely poem, Rhonda, a beautiful, dance between blossoms and bubbles that flows dreamily along in your Sonnet. Perfect for Olive's contest. Best wishes and hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/26/2015 8:19:00 AM
Rhonda, your poem is quite beautiful, I am sure Olive will love it, best of luck, it rates a perfect 7 for me, and thanks for visiting my poem, and the rains...
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Date: 3/26/2015 6:32:00 AM
Lovely, Rhonda. :) It's full of love and joy and spring!! Good luck in the contest. Hugs
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Date: 3/26/2015 2:23:00 AM
I love the originality of your rhymes...
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Date: 3/25/2015 10:49:00 PM
This is superb sonnet with its superb and lovely touch my very dear friend, Rhonda. I love it so much. A winner for me! Thank you so much for sharing! May I also take this chance to thank you for your precious time stopping by leaving me your wonderful comment on my poem. Many blessings to you! love lots and biggest hug, Leonora
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Date: 3/25/2015 5:01:00 PM
When I saw you had entered this contest I knew your poem would be good, this is right up your alley, as one who writes sonnets I pay attention to the other poets who write sonnets well...good luck
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