Blossoms

of life n death an sweet caress, an pretty flowers too, with a little shower i am blest, must shut my winders 2... great poetry Francine.... "Temporary Blossoms" Don

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/12/2012 6:51:00 AM

Like yours "Blossoms" Don, great done. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/11/2012 11:09:00 PM

cute Don, we're having our little showers here too, Thanks for the comment

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/11/2012 10:11:00 PM

This is a mighty and fantastic write my friend! I believe your write to be a special and glorious one! I think your best line in this poem is, "must shut my winders 2..." very humorous part of your write...though not the only funny line! I really enjoy your poem that I have read this evening! This is a truly incredible write Don! Great Work!!