Bloody Church

The hand was a blur as it appeared holding a gun. 
I wanted to scream but my mind cried out run. 
Please don't shoot, I thought I have a family. 
Doesn't he know that this will be blasphemy. 
The gun looked huge in the young man's hand. 
The gunman was talking but I didn't understand. 
As the first shot was fired everything slowed down. 
I was amazed by the smell and the deafening sound. 
It didn't seem real but there was the blood. 
The sound of the body was a muffled thud. 
As the first bullet entered I thought of my wife. 
I love her more than I do my own life. 
This can't happen, not here not in this place. 
To kill in God's house is more than a disgrace. 
As vacant eyes stare up towards the ceiling,
We'll all need to pray for the nation's healing.

Scott Williams
11/1/15
Any sad poem
Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/5/2015 2:15:00 AM
Terrific write, Scott, well done!. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/5/2015 7:49:00 AM
Thanks, Viv.I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem.
Date: 11/3/2015 5:15:00 PM
Scott, congrats on your first place win!
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Date: 11/3/2015 9:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert.
Date: 11/3/2015 2:45:00 PM
Scott, congratulations on your win! Hugsies
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Date: 11/3/2015 9:06:00 PM
Thanks for your nice comments.
Date: 11/3/2015 12:59:00 PM
Scott, Congratulations on your Any Sad Poem win. LOVE **SKAT**
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Date: 11/3/2015 9:05:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, SKAT.
Date: 11/3/2015 5:53:00 AM
Hi, Scott. Congratulations on such an expressive poem. You put me in the house of worship.
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Date: 11/3/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thank you so much. I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 11/3/2015 1:39:00 AM
Wonderful pen I must say Scott.. powerful words.. Congrats on much deserved first place win... a seven for this!
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Date: 11/3/2015 9:13:00 AM
Thank you so much Dr. I really appreciate your nice comments.
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