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Blood in the Quiet

Silence isn’t quiet — it’s the scream stuck in my throat, the venom dripping from broken teeth, the promise shattered on cracked floors. Your silence is a fist beating against my ribs, each unanswered breath a knife twisting deeper, a war waging beneath broken skin. I claw at shadows grasping ghosts that slip through bleeding fingers, love drowned in the dark, where silence is a battlefield and nothing survives.

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Date: 6/22/2025 11:29:00 PM
Very powerful. I perceived this as a win when I first saw it, but subtlety of fear imbues all judgement. Poetry illustrates that all judgement is personal perspective, & this interpretation of Silence shows that clearly > a Battlefield for Soul is both poetry & silence. ThkU 4 this authentic write, Trude
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Date: 6/22/2025 5:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 6/22/2025 2:34:00 PM
This is really good, I can see why it's a winner, sad the first judge couldn't see it's a quality write.
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Date: 6/22/2025 12:12:00 PM
I love this. Congrats.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/22/2025 4:40:00 PM
Can't wait to see you with your first moustache
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Rob Carmack
Date: 6/22/2025 2:18:00 PM
Well, I did quit smoking and hopefully, I have been reborn.
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/22/2025 2:07:00 PM
You know Rob you haven't aged a bit
Date: 6/10/2025 3:12:00 PM
One of my fave new poets got a placement. Nice one Trude!
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Becoming trude from the ruins
Date: 6/13/2025 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Tom—that means the world. Blood in the Quiet came from a place where silence wasn’t peace, but a battlefield. To have someone see that, and still call me a favorite... I don't take that lightly. Grateful beyond words, truly.

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