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Bliss State

Heaven has kissed the rolling hill the ocean waves, and desert an earthly token of goodwill set sparrows to sing in concert. A gentle touch awakes the morn in shades of pomegranate a fragile lipping, dawn is born through the woods and cliffs of granite. The globes caressed and embraced as each denizen is delighted for death is not a rendered grace life is heaven, all are invited.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/5/2013 12:51:00 AM
I found one here that I really love!! It resonates with beauty and good will for all. a fave.
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Date: 9/17/2013 12:14:00 PM
Debbie this is a very graceful walk through life's journey, I think the pomegranate tree is one of the most exciting things to seek they hang like globes of life and when the sun hits them they light like a ball of fire, wonderful to read your work again...David
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Date: 9/16/2013 7:08:00 AM
Faving this. You, who tsks me about perfect words used one here that had me reading the line four times... lipping... YES! Will be back tonight... got my email, FINALLY... Al, my brother in law, is dying. My sister in law is working on getting a hospital bed so he can die at home. Hey, glad you took summer by the hand and frolicked. Life is so painfully short... and beautiful. Hugs and love from Dee...
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Date: 9/14/2013 3:20:00 PM
lovely soothing poetry very relaxing to read tina x
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Date: 9/13/2013 2:21:00 PM
Nice poetic way to describe a morning sunrise. Overall, a splendid work as usual.
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:28:00 PM
Nice work Poetess!!!!Cindy :)
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Date: 9/12/2013 3:11:00 PM
Hi Debbie, A most charming and delightful write.. Ken
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:52:00 AM
Very very beautiful and serene, Debbie...Wow...wonderful words. Thanks for posting this. Hugs
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Date: 9/12/2013 5:00:00 AM
Life is heaven indeed and so besutiful the imagery in each stanza...Awesome
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