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Bliss In Solitude

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This was for the"Solitude" contest but it was over before I finished my piece! - just wanted to post it anyway-

The cacophony, the clamor
The artificial glamour
The rush to acquire stuff
Fill the emptiness with fluff
Smother silence with yammers
Compressing questions, neglecting answers

Wisdom awaits in secluded woods
In scarlet sunsets, understood
Elicit bliss in solitude
The still in search of self precludes
Repose anonymities permeate
And soothe the restless agitate

From discordance, isolate
Reclusive paths both curve and straight
Frenzies lessens and abates
Turmoil lightens, evaporates

In lush quarantine of thought
Quietude of soul is sought
Equanimity in time alone
Replenishes soil in which dreams are grown

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/13/2018 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great ending.
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Date: 7/13/2018 6:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win. Nicely written.... Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/12/2018 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations, Michelle, on your wonderful win with your beautifully expressed poem on the lovely replenishing quality of solitude. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/12/2018 3:08:00 PM
A beautiful poem with a perfect ending Michelle. Sublime! Congratulations on your third placement! : )
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Date: 7/12/2018 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful write Michelle, would have placed higher without near rhymes. In a rhyming contest I look for perfect rhymes, you know for next time! Congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 5/4/2018 1:18:00 PM
beautiful!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/4/2018 3:26:00 PM
thank you so much, Kale!

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