Bliss

5-line Max Poetry Beating merry tunes by steel pan, Listening to various tones played on each shape of drum, Impressing drum sticks to echo rhythmic scales through the air. Sending the crowd in wild ecstasy, Seated on bleachers in pavilion or stand.

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Probir Gupta

Date: 11/5/2016 12:29:00 PM

This is good too ... Autumn seems better ... Though qualitatively both very well written ...

Rainbow Promise
Date: 11/7/2016 8:49:00 PM

Thank you Probir. Your encouragement makes me more confident. God bless, RP.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 11/5/2016 5:52:00 AM

What a joyous read from you, my friend. I am glad that I dropped by.

Rainbow Promise
Date: 11/5/2016 5:58:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by and commenting Afolabi, glad that it was a joy to you. The thing is, I wrote two poems and now I am really pondering on which to submit. God bless you and enjoy your day.