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Blinding Rain

something about the rain against the window pane now blurred vision

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Date: 8/7/2015 11:10:00 PM

it is so hard to see....any further than me....because I am so I be....forever in the rain, all Eternity....:)

Carrie White
Date: 8/29/2015 10:42:00 AM

I'm loving this reply. :D

Date: 7/6/2015 4:51:00 AM

Lovely one...Carrie!

Date: 7/3/2015 7:17:00 PM

Carrie,, love the haiku. Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT

Date: 7/1/2015 11:49:00 PM

lovely imagery, enjoyed your haiku *luv, p.d.

Date: 7/1/2015 12:45:00 PM

I really like this!! If it is for the contest, you need to change the syllables a bit.

Carrie White
Date: 7/1/2015 12:48:00 PM

Thank you. I did not write it for any contest. Actually have not done any of the contest on here yet. Blessings to you. :)