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Blind Faith (Limeric)

Faith is like radar that sees through the fog When faith is forced by reason agog When it becomes blind it dies It is like a bird that feels Light in dark dawn still defog. In faith there is enough light For those who want to believe it But for those who don’t believe Enough shadows to blind the eye I for one like the colour of the Dwait. ======================== For contest : Blind Faith Dwait (In Hindu mythology) means you can reach God thro’ a Guru (Master). Master can be anyone in your life, but generally it is the mother.

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Date: 6/1/2010 11:33:00 AM
I really like this one. nice work. ~Rain
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Date: 5/30/2010 1:43:00 PM
Without our faith, what do we have ? I honor people who protect the importance of their faith, how smart they are. Powerful poem Dr.
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:52:00 AM
We all need an earthly person to lead us as a child to help us develop our greatest potential...So many children don't have that today...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/29/2010 7:33:00 AM
I truely enjoyed reading this poem, great view of faith!
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Date: 5/26/2010 9:19:00 PM
True in a sense, people who don't believe in certain things can't always see how others can.
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Date: 5/25/2010 1:37:00 AM
Faith is a very important part of our lives. Without it, we can never achieve happiness and share our feelings. Beautiful writing:)
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:27:00 PM
Very interesting and new idea for me. Thanks for your comments. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:44:00 PM
WOW ...Dr. Ram ..how inspirational and lovely is this entry.. good luck ... great to do this in Limerick style for the contest... a superb job.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/24/2010 6:48:00 PM
Dr. Ram, very interesting perspective - I reckon good is good in whatever way we choose to seek it - Great job on this poem, thanks for stopping by today, God Bless, mj
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Date: 5/24/2010 6:28:00 PM
Ahem I would have to be one of the blind ones then.......but well written all the same!
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:33:00 PM
This is excellent. Faith is the evidence of things unseen. I like this poem on faith. It's like seeing through the third eye of the chakras. Keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:37:00 PM
Nice limericks, Dr. Love, daver
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:36:00 PM
Nice limericks, Dr. Love, daver
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Date: 5/24/2010 10:56:00 AM
Interesting perspective. Yes, there is light in faith--and hope too. Thanks for the explanation at the end. I learned something new. Thank you also for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 5/24/2010 8:39:00 AM
enjoyed your vision and message!..
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:35:00 AM
This is wonderful perspective of faith....that opening line is a stunning description of blind faith, like radar that sees through the fog...indeed it is. Good luck with this one! ~ Carrie
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Date: 5/24/2010 7:14:00 AM
Hi, Dr. Ram, good message. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/24/2010 4:50:00 AM
NICE 1 ON THE FAITH, HAVE YOUR SELF A WONDERFUL DAY,,SKAT
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Date: 5/24/2010 4:32:00 AM
enjoyed, have a nice day sir,..p..d
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