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Blind Date: Love At Second Sight

She was pretty. Her long hair was yeller. He was ugly… a balding old feller He slurred, "ma handle be Luke," She gagged and started to puke, ‘till she saw the gold stashed in his cellar!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/20/2011 9:25:00 AM
The Gold Diggers sure are out there Robert. Made me chuckle you have with this gem. Have a lovely Sunday :)
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Date: 11/14/2011 6:22:00 AM
Ha..I needed the smile..I can't imagine how she pucked...nor want to... For that matter..... Lol.... But, gold.talks.... It better be lots.. Yes i.would.have sighted on things around... Enjoyed..p.d
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Date: 11/8/2011 1:12:00 PM
So funny, Rob. My hair be yeller, now where's this feller? Really enjoyed your limerick. Need just one more to close my contest with Alexa. How about it (if you haven't already entered)? Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/8/2011 12:25:00 PM
Got a chuckle...Money talks so they say and it was saying good catch of the day..Enjoyed reading your witty work...Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2011 12:25:00 PM
Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Date: 11/4/2011 5:47:00 PM
Hmmm, might make me take a second look! At least I got a chuckle out of it Robert, you do spin a good line! :)
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Date: 11/4/2011 2:32:00 PM
lol! There's nuthin like secon' looks ta make a gal fall in luv, fur sur' ;)
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Date: 11/4/2011 1:18:00 PM
All of the sudden she liked shiny things. Tony
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