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Blind Date - Not Worth the Wait

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I agreed to a hot blind date In search of my soul mate We arranged to meet at eight… but I was running a little late. I arrived in quite a state He was waiting and quite irate His good looks I did not rate - He was hairy and so over weight Gee he looked like a primate I wished that I could emigrate! 10-10-17

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Alexis Y.

Date: 10/19/2017 1:45:00 PM

Hi Jan, If the contest had been just to write a monorhyme this would have placed high. It was so entertaining and funny. The picture complimented the poem very well:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 10/19/2017 4:11:00 PM

aww thanks Alexis I ended up writing 3 poems inspired by the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Stephen Pennell

Date: 10/14/2017 8:02:00 AM

Im 8 1/2 stone down now so live in hope lol

Jan Allison
Date: 10/14/2017 11:22:00 AM

WOW well done Stephen!!!:-) hugs jan xx

Kevin Shaw

Date: 10/12/2017 5:24:00 PM

Hi Jan, saw you were online so thought I would check one of your poems out. I hit upon this one, great picture, quite a handsome chap really. I loved your Monorhyme. Somebody would love him but I can see why he's not your ideal blind date, regards Kevin xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/14/2017 11:21:00 AM

Thanks Kevin. I was inspired by Alexis's contest and have another monorhyme to post too:-) hugs jan xx

Tahira Parveen

Date: 10/11/2017 5:09:00 AM

lol, reminded me of a certain time. Exactly what happened. Good write Jan :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/11/2017 5:52:00 AM

Oh Gosh Tahira that must have been horrible that you had it for real!:-) hugs jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 10/10/2017 5:13:00 PM

Fun monorhyme, Jan! I love your ideas.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2017 5:16:00 PM

Thanks Agnes:-) i do appreciate all your support:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/10/2017 5:04:00 PM

very cute one, jan! good job with the monorhyme...

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2017 5:09:00 PM

I wrote this for Alexis's contest then re read the rules and realised it had to be a Halloween theme but I thought it was worth posting and have also written another poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/10/2017 1:51:00 PM

I B grin'n! hugloochies ~ j

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2017 4:20:00 PM

Cheers John hugs jack xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2017 12:05:00 PM

- Not exactly "Prince Charming", Jan :))) -Very funny - I have never been on blind date :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... I have some apples for you :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/10/2017 12:23:00 PM

I went on a double date with a friend - I based a poem about it lol - I was meeting a guy and he asked if I could bring a friend for his mate it was a disaster lol:-) hugs jan xx