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BLEST FREEDOM BLISS

Grateful to God always let’s savor bliss of divine liberation glow giving praise. While reaching-out we optimize liberty’s flow sans pout. Love’s deed leads us all go freed*. Grateful to God always we optimize liberty’s flow freed. *John 8:36 If the Son therefore shall make you free, ye shall be free indeed. August 28, 2024 10th place, "Let's Minichu on freedom" Rhyme Poetry Writing Premiere Contest; Sponsored by Mohan Chutani; judged on 9/15/2024.

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Mohan Chutani

Date: 9/18/2024 6:21:00 AM

Beata, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best, Mohan

Len Gasun

Date: 9/17/2024 8:28:00 AM

Lovely Minichu like a beautiful song. Hugging this gem of yours my dear poet friend Beata. Thanks a lot for sharing and Big Congrats on your well-deserved win! God bless you always. Hugs

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/16/2024 8:10:00 AM

Love your consistent emphasis on the spiritual, Beata. I debated a spiritual piece for my first minichu but chose another theme. When it did not place, I edited it as a tribute to God's grace. I am much happier with it now. Congratulations on your honorable - I appreciated and enjoyed your piece.

Crystol Woods

Date: 9/16/2024 7:05:00 AM

Great theme idea and you've utilized the form perfectly I think! Love the poetic phrasing too! Xo

Miranda Hawley

Date: 8/28/2024 6:04:00 PM

"While reaching-out we optimize liberty’s flow" I agree with your message in these two lines.