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Decades of mystic dreamers have worn the path trod across the leys, coupling pairs within Stonehenge. Beneath the Wiltshire skies cornflower blue; they lust, lotus-eaters, loose-limbed, seeking a blessed outcome. With longing strides-- they reach, climbing earthen berms to add their lovers song to move with the cycles. Some take the blessed day, others wait the pearly moon. See her so fairy fair dressed in naught but moonlight? Watch his black-haired beast rise once encircled by her arms. Back pressed against the dolmens, her heels wreath his waist as virgin blood runs red like the holly berries to feed the holy earth, she'll bear his child; she trusts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/23/2016 9:40:00 PM
I have been to Stonehenge...you may have channeled something here.. takes me back... I took my daughter there when she was six (shes 13 now) besides the amazing history...It was such a spiritual experience...I am sure its in her memory. Thanks for the trip.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/23/2016 10:37:00 PM
yes Toni I do trance write-but there's no knowing when it will happen, it just does.
Date: 11/30/2014 7:49:00 PM
WOW! Debbie, I am so glad I checked this one out - this is indeed a masterpiece with deep sensuality in all its mystical glory! This is a winner in its own right! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Warmest regards, Pandita.
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Date: 11/30/2014 5:11:00 PM
You wrote this with passion, Debbie. You take me back thousands of years when earth was a better place than it is now (in my humble opinion!). I've never been to Stonehenge, but your photo reminds me a lot of our Maltese neolitic temples...the oldest in Europe...Hagar Qim, Mnajdra and Ggantija being the most popular. // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 11/30/2014 5:12:00 PM
Ohhh I have just noticed that you're a winner with this lovely poem! Congratulations! // paul
Date: 11/30/2014 1:35:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats great to read this again Debbie:-) hugs jan ss
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:57:00 PM
Congrats on the win Debbie and have a good day.
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:20:00 PM
Congrats Debbie :)
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Date: 10/28/2014 10:11:00 PM
This is really mystical! Decades of mystic dreamers! Peace and Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:47:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful! Love the ending....very moving!
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:45:00 PM
What a masterpiece Debbie. I've added this one in my favorites. Your descriptions, wording, the image you've created and the trust....wow! A real gem sweetie! Thank you for sharing and also thank you for your kind comment!
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:27:00 PM
Oops sorry Debbie, Good Luck I know this will do well in the challenge.
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Date: 10/28/2014 7:23:00 PM
What to say? Brilliant as always.
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Date: 10/28/2014 3:22:00 PM
That is a magnificently romantic setting; no wonder you bear his child.
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Date: 10/24/2014 10:39:00 AM
At last it's sure that truth is always truth. I loved much this poem and my fav. one. You have beautifully ended with the golden words "she'll bear his child; she trusts". Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 10/23/2014 2:15:00 PM
Debbie, I can see the couple walking through Stonehenge in anticipation of romance. I enjoyed this one very much. You have some great imagery as well as a story.
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Date: 10/23/2014 7:26:00 AM
Mystical and erotic! I felt like a voyeur, a rather pleasurable experience.
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Date: 10/22/2014 3:31:00 PM
Crickey ! Oh Matron ! Very Oh ! I want to be there !
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Date: 10/22/2014 2:06:00 PM
Love this, Debbie; excellent!!
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:04:00 PM
really love how you drew this excellent piece debbie
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:04:00 PM
wonderful imagery - not been to Stonehenge since I was a kid - such a magical mystical place. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/22/2014 1:00:00 PM
Nice Alexandrine, Debbie! love and light! xxx D.
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