Blessed Be

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       The Earth is a living entity 

               A living sphere 

     spinning and gyro scoping 

   Forever generating and vibrating 

                Living Energy 

With a swirling nickel/iron liquid core 

         that reaches out thru the Cosmos like a cosmic door 

Forever protecting the floor of Flaura 

           The stuff that dreams are made of everyone 

     Hot magma blood that cools into a crust 

Grounded by gravity’s leash from the sun 

      An atmosphere of gases that gives 

                          All life breath 

                  The Earth, she breathes 

            just like the best of us 

                  Living here 

 
                            - Blessed Be 
                     (the lungs like fresh air)

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