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Bled Rose
"Fragrance wafted where're she goes" That's how you compared me to a rose...
You came and stopped by, some loveless day And told me you were going away To never come back ever at all Weak and trembling I slipped to the floor. A bruised fractured heart, a weeping soul Nothing nor anyone could console As my spirit began to decay I started slowly fading away. There I lay truly torn and broken By the cruel words that were spoken Just as the red rose when drained of life My heart was empty, wallowing strife. No hands my lifeless soul to caress No words to comfort the hopelessness A withered dry rose with anguished heart Devastated that love’s torn apart. Cold as the promise we would be wed Is my poor heart now you've gone and left No longer blooming, face turned to sun The core of my world's fled, left me numb. Knowing how much I loved you to bits You gave me a rose, my parting gift Losing you was for me just too much Squeezing every drop of my life's blood. I can't forget your face as you left Your smile as you wished me all the best Now the love has gone that quenched my thirst A blood bled rose has dispersed from earth.
18th October 2020
ALL YOURS (Feb 19) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand *

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Date: 2/20/2021 8:45:00 AM
Belle, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderfully penned poem, nice image too _Constance
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/21/2021 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Constance very much ~ Belle
Date: 2/19/2021 6:08:00 PM
A Rose is another favourite of mine....Congrats on your win Belle :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/19/2021 6:59:00 PM
I love roses too, thank you Carol ~ Belle
Date: 2/19/2021 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write and red rose picture. Love It. Have a blessed day...................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 2/19/2021 9:09:00 AM
I wasn’t aware of the win Paula, what a lovely surprise. Thank you for the congratulations, have a blessed day yourself ~ Belle
Date: 10/18/2020 11:25:00 AM
Great write Belle , nice imagery and expression. Blessings,Gordon
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/18/2020 1:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon. Blessing to you too. Belle
Date: 10/18/2020 6:38:00 AM
This is brilliant... not only does it flow and rhyme so well.. It is great storytelling through poetic words...
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/18/2020 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Silent One, I truly appreciate your comments and support. Belle

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