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Bleak

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A Revision 

for Brian Strand's Your Choice B Contest 

used P-S Syllable Counter 

come back heart into arms that are nonsense since your departure- where will I lodge revenge should I punch the ether out victimize the ozone layer what world will be mine in your passing~ as grey as the grave that robbed me reckless

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Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/21/2025 3:03:00 PM
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Creative winning work. I am glad that I chose it to read today. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K
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David Crandall
Date: 2/16/2025 10:05:00 AM
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Nice poem, it seems like a bleak, and futile feeling.
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Trina Layne
Date: 3/16/2025 10:43:00 PM
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I did a retake on this one. Thanks for the new title!
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Trina Layne
Date: 2/16/2025 11:10:00 AM
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Yeah. It is :(. It was inspired by a recent death, a friend who lost his wife suddenly, just a few days before Valentine's.

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