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Blazing Trail

They swim like tadpoles. Thoughts! I was waiting at the far end of pond. Heartburn increases at dusk, fierce battle of blazing stripes on blankets. On the scarlet face a bridge was burning in wide open eyes. Somebody takes an aim hauling a runaway bruise. Blood comes out roaring. Weep, my stars, ice was thin – drowning the lake. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 11:25:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Satish. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:02:00 AM
Your bleeting heart runs red! The cycle of life and death so vividly captured! But, I must say animals poach their own to survive, so I am not a bleeding heart when a human takes an animal life.
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