Blazing Hills of Autumn

Hillsides were ablaze
from sunlight's saffron fingers
Leaves fell like raindrops
from branches of ancient trees
What a stunning Autumn scene

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

November 15, 2023 at 7:19 AM

Lin, your poem captures the breathtaking beauty of an autumn scene with a vividness that is truly remarkable. The imagery of sunlight’s saffron fingers setting the hillsides ablaze and leaves falling like raindrops from ancient trees is both evocative and poignant. Your words create a stunning tableau that leaves the reader in awe of nature’s splendor. A truly beautiful piece! - Blessings, Daniel

Lin Lane

November 15, 2023 at 7:40 AM

How nice to read such an encouraging review from you, Daniel. I think we have mutual admiration and respect for each other's poetry. Thank you for your kind and supportive comments.