Blarney Castle

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I walk the path amid the trees
where footsteps of the past have tread.
Where ancient stones of Blarney please,
where lips upon the stone are wed.

My roots run deep with Irish blood
and County Cork's where my folk hail.
There Blarney meets where tourists flood
to kiss the stone below the rail.

Enchanting are the turrets here
bedecked in autumn's vines of red,
the little stream that wanders near,
and steps to where I'm being led.

The Blarney stone at last I see,
so bending backwards now to kiss
the stone, my friend is holding me.
That’s not a mark I want to miss!

I have a thought;  I now can say
my mouth has touched where many more
have touched upon this stone of gray.
How many thousands came before?

These ancient walls in ruin stand
With greater hist'ry than most know,
Yet still throngs yield to their command
In visitors that come and go.

Inside the marrow of my bones,
I feel a thrill . Will eloquence
be mine from having kissed this stone?
I feel the chill of reverence!

Andrea Dietrich and Connie Marcum Wong
September 4, 2015

Partner up Contest Collaboration with Andrea Dietrich
Sponsor Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/22/2015 2:18:00 AM
Very, very well done indeed ladies! This I really did enjoy. My very best to you both - Cheers! :-) john P.s A Seven!
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Date: 9/16/2015 12:43:00 AM
You were both eloquent before the kiss, so now your hyper-eloquent. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 9/13/2015 5:55:00 PM
hey, I need to come here and say congratulations to YOU and to ME. Wheeee
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Date: 9/13/2015 10:55:00 AM
A stunning collaboration Connie and Andrea, you took the reader on a personal tour of the Blarney Castle ending with the Blarney stone and the anticipation of a kiss. Emile. #7
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Date: 9/12/2015 2:12:00 PM
A wonderful poem!! I was there once... A wonderful poem!!!
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Date: 9/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
incroyable et belle
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Date: 9/10/2015 8:11:00 AM
The two of you have written a seamless piece of poetry. Great write, and stirring sentiment (I haven't thought of it before, but now I feel I must go there).
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Date: 9/9/2015 10:02:00 PM
What a well and a lovely collab. I love how it was constructed beautifully and excellent........A.M.
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Date: 9/9/2015 1:12:00 AM
Wonderful collab Connie and Andrea! Congrats on superb win! Loved the last stanza... excellent!
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Date: 9/8/2015 4:13:00 PM
So pleased to be back with deserved congratulations!! A very worthy top podium finish! ~~ paul
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:58:00 PM
Beautifully penned ..you two did a fantastic job...Congrats on the win
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Date: 9/8/2015 11:30:00 AM
A fabulous collaboration Connie it brought back memories as I've visited the castle and kissed the Blarney Stone:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2015 10:21:00 AM
congrats Connie brings back memories hugs
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/10/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thank you very much for our wonderful win Shadow. Hugs, Connie
Date: 9/8/2015 8:47:00 AM
Connie, Congratulations on your - Partner up - contest win. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:39:00 AM
What a lovely collaboration poem, Connie! The rhyme and flow are magnificent. Congratulations to both you and Andrea on your top of the podium, well-deserved win! Sandra
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Date: 9/8/2015 8:18:00 AM
Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 9/6/2015 10:07:00 AM
Wow! My Irish roots cry out that this one is truly great and deserves a shot of whiskey to cele--brate! Fantastic collab my friends! A7
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Date: 9/5/2015 11:02:00 PM
Connie, I could not believe how full my email box was today and also here at Soup between the blog and my soupmail, oh my, I have not had time to do anything tonight but read sweet comments of all my friends. So I will post up our poem within the hour and go back to hotmail too and search for what you sent me! Thanks so much. Luv ya.
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Date: 9/5/2015 7:42:00 PM
What a seamless and lovely collaboration!! But what else can I expect from two talented writers like you:) Top marks go to this offering which I expect to see on the winners' list! Hugs // paul
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/8/2015 2:18:00 AM
This is the second collaboration I have ever done Paul. My first was written in 2000. Can't think of a better person to collaborate with than my talented friend Andrea. I got us started off with the first two stanzas. I am thrilled we received top placement because I thought I might drag her down some. I appreciate your lovely comment. I'm still fighting this cold. Seems the whole island is down with it. Hugs, Connie
Date: 9/5/2015 12:50:00 AM
connie, I hope to have mine up tomorrow. I will put the beautiful pictures with it that you sent me. (If I can pull them from the email.) Gad this one is finally UP!! Yayyyy.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/5/2015 3:45:00 AM
Happy Birthday dear friend! I sent you a little gift that I am sure you will enjoy. Check your email. Have a beautiful birthday and thank you for sharing your talent with me to collaborate on this poem. Love and Blessings, Connie
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Date: 9/5/2015 1:01:00 AM
If you can't find it, just right click on the picture above and post it that way Andrea. Thanks for putting up with me being ill while trying to collaborate with you. Best laid plans....hugs, Connie
Date: 9/4/2015 8:05:00 PM
well well, what a beauty of a poem, when I read poems like this, makes me want to hop on a plane and fly right over there!!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/4/2015 11:24:00 PM
How sweet of you Arthur. All of Europe enchants! Thank you very much.
Date: 9/4/2015 5:16:00 PM
What a fabulous write ladies. I have always wanted to visit Ireland and kiss the Blarney Stone.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/4/2015 7:50:00 PM
Thank you Tim. Even though this castle is now in ruins, it is stilll very beautiful. Take a camera if you get to go there as it is so picturesque. Cheers, Connie
Date: 9/4/2015 9:30:00 AM
OH ME OH MY>>>>OH PIE IN THE SKY....you two just rocked me out of my wits with this write....Loved it!!! LOVED IT! What a wonderful piece...I need to know more...What's the secret of the kiss? Eloquence? How did that come about? I see that this will do well...and why not? Two amazing poetesses teaming up. :) Lovely....Hats off to you and Andrea! In iambic tetrameter...what glee for me!!!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/4/2015 7:45:00 PM
There is so much history that goes with this lovely castle ruin Eileen. Queen Elizabeth dubbed it blarney castle. You should google it as hit history is quite interesting and much too long to include in this comment box. Three stanzas are mine four are Andreas. I caught the flu and almost didn't come up with my part. Glad you enjoyed it. I visited there where my roots are with my aunt in 2007. Thanks, Connie PS Andrea will try to post this poem too.
Date: 9/4/2015 8:46:00 AM
- A great poem from both of you - Good luck in the contest! - I wish you a lovely and peaceful weekend, Connie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/4/2015 7:47:00 PM
Thank you very much Anne Lise. I will check out your latest work. You have a good weekend too. Cheers, Connie
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