Blankets of Stardust

Blankets of stardust, showers in sprinkles of gold
Bathing together in starlight, what beauty we behold

Golden stardust that’s magic, and lights up your eyes
Sprinkles all around us, our love gained this prize.

Blankets of stardust to wrap and enfold us so tight
This promise is for lovers, every moonlit night.

The Sparkle of love, sprinkles with each piece of stardust 
Entwined in the sparkles, and showers of golden trust.

Trust never to hurt or cause each other pain
Bathed in showers of stardust and love once again. 

The blanket of stardust that will pillow your head
Laying under the moonlight, no more to dread

Covered with a blanket of stardust, such a magical thing
Surrounded by the sparkles, wrapped as in a golden ring.

© ~GG~ 23/12/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Smith Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Congrats on your honor. Lovely couplets ...very moving...Mandy.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Thanks Tim I really do appreciate your kind words xx
Horsman Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 1:28 AM
worthy winner wonderful poem,, congrats..
Arowolo Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 4:01 PM
Beautiful and Splendid piece,Mandy...Great job...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...XOXO...
Liwayway Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Big Congratulations on your fantastic win my friend Mandy. I want to have this blanket of stardust as my pillow so that I can sleep soundly tonight. thanks for stopping by on my poems. have a nice day! :) Hugs, Maria
Guzzi Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Congrad's on your win, oh couplet Master ;). Light & Love
Villarosa Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 7:10 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Mandy. (^_^).
Kendrick Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 3:48 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Great one ...Sara
May Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 3:35 PM
congrats on your win Mandy
Roberts Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 12:18 PM
well done for your 1st place........Seren
Haick Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 12:12 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Mandy! This is lovely. Wow, it's so cold here.. I wish it were at least summer to look forward to some stardust! Love, Annalise
Squyres Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 10:58 AM
This is so sparkling !! Love it ! Congrats on your win !! How talented you are to use stardust in each couplet !!
Johnson Avatar
January 23, 2013 at 10:42 AM
Lovely writing Mandy. congratulations on your big no. 1. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 8:53 PM
Mandy, beautiful... makes me want to cover myself with the imagery. Congratulations in Gail's "Blanket of Stardust" contest. :-). Have yourself a goodnight~LINDA
Kendrick Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 5:15 PM
Ahhh!! This one has passion and romance..Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work this eve..Thanks for stopping by...Your kind reviews are always so uplifting..Sara
Mandani Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 12:21 PM
I like this one. "Trust never to hurt or cause each other pain" I wish you MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR.
Komala Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 8:46 AM
This is a real awesome write,,, thank you dear angel GG for sharing your wonderful work,,,, and wishing you have a merry merry Christmas day <3<3<3
May Avatar
December 25, 2012 at 7:19 AM
beautiful write Mandy....best wishes
Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 10:49 PM
Soup mail
Adams Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 7:35 PM
such a lovely write, Merry Christmas to you :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 4:34 PM
so romantic, just like another one i just saw, which was also romantic! hmmm, should I stay romantic when I do mine or explore another route?? Good to see a stardust poem today.
La France Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 1:24 PM
Mandy, this such a pretty poem, best of luck in the contest, Constance
Ober Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 1:06 PM
This imagery is perfect for this magical time of year! Fantastic job :) Merry Christmas!
Babcock Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 11:08 AM
Merry Christmas to you and your family. love phyl
Poet Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 10:43 AM
Love this Mandy.Beautiful poem.
Horsman Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 6:03 AM
so warm, this rendering, love the last stanza, good luck in contest...
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