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Blaming It On the Moon - Contest

The moon was shining brightly Hand in hand we strolled the shore Holding each other tightly Gently lowered me to the floor His hands had no inhibitions Touching more than was permitted Sending waves of pleasure To places I didn't know existed  Again the moon is shining As we walk along the shore Looking down at my bump Smiles, cos two will soon be four.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/12/2014 5:44:00 PM
I love the then and now two separate moonlit nights and twins...lol....congrats on this being featured..hugs Tim
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Date: 11/6/2013 9:04:00 PM
Seren, , this is a pretty deep Blame It On The Moon poem.... congrats... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:30:00 PM
This is really cute and a little naughty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/2/2013 12:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win. A wonderful poem.
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:29:00 PM
Okay.......that last line says a lot !! LOL !!! A fun and romantic stroll that was through your poem!! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:10:00 PM
Interesting winning work..Congrats..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2013 5:50:00 PM
beautiful write...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/1/2013 7:29:00 AM
oh wow well done with this Sss love it a typical Seren xx
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Date: 10/21/2013 11:19:00 PM
This is a grandiose write my friend! I just love the moon and all its powers that it has on people, at least to me anyway! I really enjoyed reading how two will become four, hey twins! What a glorious piece, such a lovely poem! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:25:00 AM
Thanks Russell
Date: 10/21/2013 10:13:00 PM
Very creative and imaginative write with love and desire, Seren. Soup mail answered
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:24:00 AM
Lol thx Ram

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