Blackjack Dealer Named Whitney

There’s a wanna-be boxer named Whitney,
Who deals blackjack in Atlantic City.
I said with a straight face,
“That you’ll never win, ace.”
And then foolishly told him to hit me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pettit Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 8:55 PM
Nicely written. I used to deal blackjack in Atlantic City myself.
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2014 at 10:32 PM
haha, Love to see a good limerick!
Hamilton Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 7:48 PM
what a hoot David so funny ty for visiting my work Shadow x smile hug
May Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Very good one ...I am inspired to do one in this same vein myself..best wishes
Horne Avatar
January 1, 2014 at 1:22 PM
lol, good one! I read the title and wondered what could rhyme with Whitney
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