Black Veils and Mascara Stains

I heard an angel speak last night and he said “write”,
“Write of the anguish and pain,
The desolation, and isolation.
May the ink fall like blood,
Spill over the pages,
Making permanent marks,
Never to regain its flawless form again”

I walk down the foot-worn trail,
Bare feet turned black by the earth underneath them.
Here comes that feeling,
The feeling of death.
Creeping up on me, suffocating any lingering hope.
Looking up, a vulture cries,
Like echoes coming from my insides.

I have arrived at my destination,
Black dresses and black umbrellas,
Lined up in lines between the rows of resting places,
Single-file reminders of those bereft of life.
I remain inconspicuous, 
Hidden from the grim party's black veils and mascara stains.
Don't fret, my friend, there's hope for me yet.

She comes in to my view,
Alluring as ever, breathtakingly pulchritudinous.
Touching the cool granite wing, feeling such imperfection,
Takes my breath away.
I pray to my angel,
I pray for them to listen to my story...
And then my angel spoke to me and he said “write”.



Mirella Grosnickle
June 13, 2011
Angels in Cemeteries
Black Veils&Mascara Stains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/21/2011 1:04:00 PM
Congrats Mirella on your win in this contest with this exquisitely written piece on this theme...love, gautami
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Date: 6/21/2011 12:15:00 PM
Congrats Mirella on your well deserved win...enjoyed your poem.
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Date: 6/21/2011 5:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Angels" contest Mirella. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 9:58:00 PM
wow this is just beautiful!! The way you wove it so you ended up with that beginning quote. That was brilliant. Congrats!!
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Date: 6/20/2011 6:18:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, Mirella
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Date: 6/20/2011 10:58:00 AM
What a unique and gripping take you did here, Mirella-- really enjoyed this one-- Super congrats on your win! :)
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:41:00 PM
Congrats Mirella on your fantastic win in the contest with this stunning entry luv..
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Date: 6/19/2011 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest~
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Date: 6/14/2011 6:56:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Mirella. Please keep sharing your writing with us. I wish you much inspiration that you may continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:23:00 PM
Okay, no soup mail, you don't have it, it seems... well, Mirelle, I will tell you this way then, your poem for my contest is excellent, but "I Do Not Know", is not an accepted form for contests, not mine anyways, you need to give your poem a form, I suggest any of these, narrative, you are telling a story, lyric, the thoughts of the poet , or free verse, can you let me know when you have done that, and please do, I want so much to place this poem~~
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:18:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest, I am sending you a soup mail~~
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Date: 6/13/2011 3:22:00 PM
Very haunting expressions, Mirella
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Date: 6/13/2011 1:47:00 PM
a journey with dark thoughts to a place most of us are afraid to go or to face. I like the way you express yourself about this experiance
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