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Black Sheep - Too Late For Contest

black sheep of the flock
covers herself in white paint
silent deception ...

when she starts bleating
sound arouses suspicion
others are wary

storm clouds gather
dark face exposed by the rain
deception revealed

7/22/19

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2019 12:47:00 PM

Excellent Jan. This would have been a winner! xxoo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/27/2019 4:57:00 AM

This poem is a winner whether there is a contest or not, Jan. I know you know that. Bleat.

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/27/2019 12:48:00 AM

Great verse Jan..love ya...you should re-enter for another contest...^WW^ :o)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/23/2019 6:59:00 PM

This is really a deep, well-written senryu, Jan. The proverbial wolf in sheep's clothing. ~ Guess I ought to know in Chicago

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:44:00 PM

It has many layers to the poem and is open to interpretation GW:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/23/2019 6:52:00 PM

very nice, Jan. sorry you missed the contest. I am sure this was one I lost.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:44:00 PM

I probably would have got n/a lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/22/2019 8:55:00 PM

Nicely done, Jan! Great accompanying video!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:44:00 PM

MJ was superb he died all too young but his music lives on:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/22/2019 7:59:00 PM

Hi Jan, We got something in common, I too am considered the black sheep of family. Hey you are "good" to keep. I wish you had gotten this in the contest on time - Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:43:00 PM

I was always treated so differently to my sister ... will say no more lol:-) hugs jan xx

David Mchattie

Date: 7/22/2019 5:34:00 PM

The 'black sheep' tend to be the most interesting people to talk to. Have a great day my friend.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:42:00 PM

lol I've met a few I have to say lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/22/2019 4:52:00 PM

So that is why Trump hangs kids in cages, i.e., waiting for raindrops in the desert to wash the colour away? Well done! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:42:00 PM

LOl Rico am sure there is a poem in that for you!:=) hugs jan xx

Frederic Parker

Date: 7/22/2019 4:36:00 PM

we all have masks dear poet, the one we show strangers, the one we show friends, the one we show those we love, the one we hold for ourselves,

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:41:00 PM

oh so true Frederic, sadly as i have found to my cost that we uncover the masks of those who we held in high esteem to know everything was a lie:-( hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/22/2019 4:29:00 PM

i enjoyed your poem very much, jan, contest or not!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:40:00 PM

thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/22/2019 3:55:00 PM

i, too, am a black sheep....seldom absent of emotion, often deprived of sleep....why should care be a journey too many find too steep....but as long as i have Breath, your friendship, i will surely keep....i do apologize for my absence, but so much loss hit me so fast that i just needed some time to just think and see if i could rekindle my inspirations....i hope you understand my dear friend....

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:40:00 PM

sorry you've had a tough time Eric, welcome back to soup:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/22/2019 8:00:00 PM

Hi Eric, It is good to see you posting again my friend:-) Alexis

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/22/2019 11:34:00 AM

You created three nice short poems here! I write poetry and also write about collectibles for money! I hope you and yours are well. Thanks for the comment! Matthew Anish

Jan Allison
Date: 7/24/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thanks Matthew we see the cancer specialist soon just hope the radiotherapy treatment has cured hubby for good:-) hugs jan xx