Black Powder Rain

Likened to a beast of burden
I groan with back breaking strain
weary laden and fraught with pain
working mightily in vain
under this black powder rain.

‘Tween strife, sweat and stain
I pour out my waning strength
time drags on for hours at length
while black powder keeps a'raining
down on me.
 
For lo’ my weary, calloused hands
are ever searching for black gold
a toilsome task to mine and claim
riches come from hardened veins
as I labor under black powder rain.

Buried in a pit of purgatory
I hear the clangs and cries
picks and axes, unrelenting
grit and odors, foul, stagnanting
low bending, beneath this
ominous black powder rain.

As I suffocate in darkness 
I hear sorrow's sad refrain
ringing loud and all around me
as I beat through earth's unyielding crust
trapped in god forsaken dust
slowly drowning, underneath
this black powder rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Hello Laura, I do hope that this poem wins the contest. have a nice evening my friend.
Leiser Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 11:44 PM
It won third place. Thanks for commenting, Darlene!
La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Laura, beautifully penned for the contest theme, and a big congratulations on your win with this awesome write, well done ~
Leiser Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Thank you, Constance! :)
Roper Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Wonderful write, Laura, love the poem. Congratulations on your win
Leiser Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 8:51 PM
Thank you, Eve! I really appreciate it! So glad you liked my poem. :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 6:31 AM
Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Laura.
Leiser Avatar
November 23, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Line! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 12:36 AM
So many lives have been lost to the black lung hell. You have portrayed it well Laura. Best luck for the contest. : )
Leiser Avatar
November 10, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you, Connie! :)
Lindley Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 4:42 PM
I love this very dark poetry my great friend! You tapped into the pain, sorrow and epic darkness that this world oft heaps upon a person.. A fav.. a gem too.
Leiser Avatar
November 8, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Thanks so much, Robert, for your kind and encouraging comments!
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