Black Powder Dreams

Black Powder Dreams

Vast o’ the seas carry forth desperations 
Lives cast aside in the faces of war
Rotted wood planks, salted skin aspirations
Wind tattered sails bound of endless explore

Black powder dreams aft the end quarter season
Cannons at wait, closer still to the bow
Manned by the weak, none in need of a reason
Chilled to the bone, never wondering how

Darkened the depths beckon angry waves crashing
Bound to the rail by a pitch and a shove
Visions of loves and the homeland a’ flashing
Prayers slowly drowned before floating above

Scar rippled flesh, leathered treachery flailing
Shrieks in the night causing laughter below
Tethered by fear o’er the desolate wailing
Shadows await harbors safe to bestow

Compass point dangers adrift in the distance
Forced to push on to the end of the fall
Death shrouds belief in a fractured resistance
Down on their knees longing nothing at all

Endless the journey for pittance bled wages
Deaf to the thoughts found alone in the screams
Forever lost in the unopened pages
At the expense of their black powder dreams
  
 
11/7/18
Written for the: Black Powder Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Anthony Slausen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/26/2018 12:21:00 AM
Your subject matter of seas and sailing is one of my favorites, Chris! And your poetic story was outstanding! Congrats on your win! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so very much Laura. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/24/2018 3:00:00 PM
This poem is so outstanding Chris! It is beautifully composed and going into my Faves! Congratulations on your deserving second placement my friend! : ) xxoo
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Connie for always bring a smile to my page. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 11/23/2018 7:19:00 PM
Wonderful write, Chris. .. Congratulations on your win
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Chris Green
Date: 11/26/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you so very much Eve. :)
Date: 11/23/2018 6:36:00 AM
Deep descriptive rhythms. Love your poems Chris! Congrats
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:58:00 AM
Thank you so very much Mark.
Date: 11/23/2018 6:30:00 AM
Awesome, Chris. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/23/2018 8:57:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 11/13/2018 1:51:00 PM
This is so dark and dangerous, of both the destruction and the motivation behind it, gave me chills-
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Chris Green
Date: 11/13/2018 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so very much Michelle. I am happy you liked this one...chills and all. :)
Date: 11/8/2018 5:03:00 AM
This is beyond a deep poem, Chris, very descriptive in its awesome darkness:)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2018 7:58:00 AM
Thanks Jo for always being so kind to me. I'm glad you found this one and enjoyed it so much.
Date: 11/7/2018 8:23:00 PM
Anthony Slausen has a rare treat coming (when he lays eyes on your poem). He should pay you for this one. Soooooo good! ~ Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 11/8/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thanks my friend, I wouldn't go that far (unless it was a big amount) :)
Date: 11/7/2018 2:52:00 PM
Sooo compelling, Chris. You take the reader on this voyage and allow us to experience the feelings of those who sailed with "black powder dreams." Surely a win and a fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 3:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much Carolyn. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.
Date: 11/7/2018 11:04:00 AM
WoW!...epic writing my friend...ready for a win, Chris...love & light...^WW^
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Chris Green
Date: 11/7/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. See you at the top. :)
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