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Black Powder

Black Powder --------------------------------------- He waits offstage, his posture tense, his gaze locked on the audience - his first in years. He blots the sweat that wets his face, then walks onstage and gets in place, amidst their cheers. In bowtie, vest and dinner tails, he's dressed down to his fingernails. His face is flushed. His eyes close tight, his breathing slows, beyond his sight, the tension grows The house is hushed... If he can pull from knurled old trunks, the Magic that their world debunks, he can pretend (at least until the curtain rolls) it's still his show, and he controls it in the end. Illusion casts no lasting spell. No, in conclusion, he's not well, so... shifting gears, he lifts his hat to loud applause, black powder sifting out like gauze... and disappears... * ---------------------------------------

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/2/2019 1:23:00 AM
excellent! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/1/2019 1:05:00 PM
Back with warm congrats, Lycia. A beautiful read.
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Date: 1/1/2019 12:53:00 PM
What a very creative write Lycia and a well deserved top ten.
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Date: 12/30/2018 8:30:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Lycia. Janice
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Date: 12/30/2018 3:58:00 PM
Lycia, congrats on your win on mile 6 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest. With this poem you introduced me to the Tail-Rhyme. Brilliant! I loved the way you took us through his tortured performance to the final explosive applause (or lack thereof) :) BOOM! At least, that's my story and I'm sticking to it :) ~Mark
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Date: 11/11/2018 1:58:00 PM
This is so wonderfully written, LyLy, I love the form, I must try it some time. John
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/16/2018 5:20:00 PM
Thank you, John! Yes, I greatly enjoy the Tail Rhyme. I have a couple more, if you'd like to read them. See: 'Each Spangle From Your Tree' and 'Poseidon's Realm'
Date: 11/10/2018 1:13:00 PM
Hi Lycia, dropping by wimy congratulations on your much deserved win in Brian's contest. have a wonderful sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/7/2018 3:46:00 PM
What an intriguing use of the title,Lycia and so atmospheric!
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/7/2018 4:40:00 PM
Hi Wendy! Thank you. LyLy xoxo
Date: 11/7/2018 2:57:00 PM
A lovely scenario, Lycia. Love your poem.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 11/7/2018 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, LG! xoxo

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