Black Pen

I grab my pen
Black and used up
The glass cracked and fragile
Covered by the cap

Cheap and lost
Then given to me
I could do better
But that's not what I need

This pen is mine
Broken, yet precious
It writes sharp lines
That somehow form words

And that to me is insane
How something so ruined
Can still do so much
How a pen that's falling apart
Can still create art

Why can't I?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/15/2017 6:16:00 PM
How can people, so ruined or aged, still contribute, if only with a prayer. Very nice poem.
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Date: 7/4/2017 9:45:00 AM
This poem shows that personal revelation is often in our hands.
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Date: 6/25/2017 5:13:00 AM
A powerful and emotive write. Congratulations on having your poem featured! Regards, John.
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Date: 6/21/2017 12:24:00 PM
Nice lines, great feelings, wonderful message. ....!!:))
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Date: 6/15/2017 6:53:00 AM
I am with Darren below...you just did create art. Regardless of the pen, broken or not, the imagination and creativity of a poet will always flow out. Nicely done and welcome to soup
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Date: 6/15/2017 3:36:00 AM
You can, you just did.... A beautiful metaphor about uncertainty, and written in a great way. You can. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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