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You thought me spineless, so in a fit of anger you tore mine out, Bloodless, I rose sword swallower, strengthened by my tattered paper edges. The abyss of your barren soul wrapped me in gauze, shrouded me on parallel partitions; nailed to the crossbars of your lust; only mother me did you revere. All hail the hidden seal*-- nailed to the missing cross, white cloaked, virginal, tresses unbound-- lay me not across the landscape of your desire-- grovel at my shrine. The Broken Column by Frida Kahlo’s *the word seal has been used to comply with Soup Guidelines First Published in Dual Coast Magazine Issue 1 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/23/2015 11:27:00 PM
a shrine coated in prickly veneer, such a tasty mural to gaze upon, I like this a lot...
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:58:00 PM
Debbie, CONGRATULATIONS, on your awesome 12 liner Ekphrasis WIN! :) SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2015 2:49:00 PM
Congrats..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 2/9/2015 3:09:00 AM
Powerful write Debbie,, leaves one pondering my friend! Congrats on ur top place win!
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Date: 2/9/2015 12:18:00 AM
thought- provoking imagery.. big congrats on your win, Debbie..
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Date: 2/8/2015 3:52:00 PM
Congrats on the deserving win ...
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Date: 2/8/2015 11:20:00 AM
Great write on "The Broken Column" by Frida Kahlo. Congratulations on your TOP WIN. God bless.
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Date: 2/7/2015 7:48:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win and a passionate write.
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Date: 2/7/2015 6:45:00 PM
BIG congrats for your top win, Debs! ( loved the movie on her life story)
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Date: 2/7/2015 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations, Debbie, on this powerful and bold poem.....as bold as the artist's rendition of her fabulous paintings ! Hooray for your number 1 win !!
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Date: 2/7/2015 5:26:00 PM
Congratulations, dear Debbie, on your most wonderful win. What a fascinating woman and incredible artist she was! I am definitely a Frida fan and I love this brilliant tribute to her! Pandita
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Date: 2/7/2015 4:51:00 PM
Incredible writing Debbie...big congrats to you!
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Date: 2/7/2015 4:21:00 PM
Debbie, my heartfelt congratulations to you for your 1st Place win on your so very powerful poem based on this courageous women. Sandra
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Date: 2/7/2015 4:47:00 PM
This female artist was quite a woman!
Date: 2/7/2015 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Debbie, very descriptive write. Blessings Eve
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place Debbie!
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Date: 2/7/2015 3:07:00 PM
such powerful imagery Debbie many congrats on your top spot:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/8/2015 6:48:00 PM
Original and fresh wording. It works.
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Date: 1/4/2015 7:25:00 AM
This is powerful free verse depicting great imagery that matches the picture you provide to accompany it. A touching creative poem, Debbie...a winner in my eyes! #7 All the best for 2015. // paul
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:30:00 PM
great imagery, debs. I saw the movie on her life and was inspired to write one of my first sonnets from seeing about all the pain she endured in her life. what a woman!
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Date: 12/31/2014 3:37:00 PM
This was beautiful: "Bloodless, I rose sword swallower, strengthened by my tattered paper edges."
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Date: 12/30/2014 7:20:00 AM
Very brilliant of the creative mind, Deb. Light and Love. Happy new year
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Date: 12/30/2014 5:21:00 AM
- A skilled writing, Debbie - Touching and deep - Year 2014 does not have many hours left .... The bells will ring in a new year 2015! - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful New Year! - We will meet again with smiles and tears in the new year - Bless you my dear friend! - // Anne-Lise :)
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