Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Black Love

Your kiss is a love letter to my heart
In bliss receiving with open arms
The purple pen you use rights all wrongs
Connecting me to you in a soulful song
Why is it we struggle within love
Embraces double like winged dove
We find a feud to be a tarp
In an hour or two making love like art
If we can find us over vanity
See green four leaf clover of sanity
Rainbow brushes beneath the waist
Passion gushes like water from lake
Not defined by lowest denomination
Black love in prime a tribal celebration.



11/24/23 Kandle Karen Jones

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Anonomus Scorpio September 27, 2023 at 6:55 PM It is one thing to write about love, it is another to understand what it means on a deeper plane. "If we can find us over vanity" to me that is as plain as plain can be...... warmly A.S. Karen Jones September 27, 2023 at 11:04 PM Your comment warms my heart. Thank you Anonomus Scorpio!

Beryl Edmonds September 23, 2023 at 8:44 PM Beautiful romantic, sensual poetry Karen, reads alike love made in heaven… Belle Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 9:03 PM So happy you even read it thank you Belle!

Joseph May September 23, 2023 at 6:03 PM A beautiful romantic write Karen... Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 6:05 PM Aw thank you Joseph!

Kim Rodrigues September 23, 2023 at 4:21 PM Wonderful imagery! The purple pen you use rights all wrongs… Rainbow brushes beneath the waist… Passion gushes like water from lake! Very sensuous. Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 5:14 PM Thanks Kim I appreciate your comments!

Jan Allison September 23, 2023 at 3:13 PM what a sensuous piece indeed Karen!:-) hugs jan xx Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 3:19 PM Thanks for reading Jan!

The Situation September 23, 2023 at 3:00 PM Holy Smokes! I'm turned on! where can I find a woman like you? The rhyming in this piece works. And Black Love too. I can relate. Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 3:05 PM Hahahaha! Well look in your closest grocery store we all buy food. Thanks for reading my poem and I enjoy your work very much!

Sotto Poet September 23, 2023 at 12:39 PM Karen, your poetry is incredibly sensuous. The way you effortlessly combine rhymes, alliterations, and the fluidity of your words is truly mesmerizing. I am grateful for the uplifting comment you left on my page. Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 12:42 PM You are a talented poet and your comments will help me encourage me to grow. Thank you Sotto Poet!

Ink Empress September 23, 2023 at 9:57 AM How beautiful and well crafted is this. Brilliant wordplay and I especially love that opening line “ your kiss is like a love letter to my heart” your use of alliterations and flow of your word weaving here is flawless! Absolutely felt the depth of this write Sam Scott September 23, 2023 at 12:35 PM You beat me to it! This is the line I adore xx Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 10:04 AM Your ability to see beauty flows from the mirrored sustenance of your very soul poetess. Thanks for your kind words and ability to see within them.

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2023 at 9:42 AM Smooth and cool sounding. it almost reminded me of a sonnet. Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 9:47 AM I appreciate your sharing and reading it Andrea!

Alexis Y. September 23, 2023 at 9:01 AM WoW! Karen, I like how you composed this. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Good title, content and rhymes. Stellar last line. Black love at in motion! Have a great weekend-Alexis Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 9:09 AM It means so much that you took time to read and comment. Thanks for kind words Alexis.

Bill Baker September 23, 2023 at 8:46 AM Very sensual poetry, Karen. Good rhyming. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. Have a great weekend. Bill Karen Jones September 23, 2023 at 9:06 AM Kind of you to compliment Bill. Hope you have a wonderful weekend as well dear.