Black Friday

<                     ladies ~ gentlemen ~ start those ...... engines
                         miss  ~ Ho ~ down - prices .... would be a sin
                                        best buy - circuit city
                                   black ~ friday .... how pitty
                        5 am ~ now ~ who ~ wears ~ smiling ... grins 





                          k- mart ~ wal - mart ~ target ~ pennys
                              red tag sales of many and plenty
                                 but you must buy in bulks
                        and ~  get ~ guy ~ like ~ the ... hulk
                to ~ push ~ cart ~ while ~ you ~ chat ~ with ... jenny




                         let's ~ all ~  hop ~ on ~ over ~ to ~ I - hop
                         your one stop for christmas breakfast slop
                                sure pancakes sounds yummy
                                     but wait till hits tummy 
                                 be sitting on stool till it plops




Entry For
Carolyn Devonshire's
Commericialized Holiday Humor Contest
Gl All And Happy Holidays
Love Kathy & Jenny
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/29/2010 1:59:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win Katherine, in Carolyn's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James
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Date: 11/29/2010 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest, Katherine! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/29/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/28/2010 10:11:00 PM
Very funny and sad. congratulations on your win. Loe, Joyce
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Date: 11/28/2010 5:02:00 PM
And so it is christmas.....wish they had a treble cleff on this keyboard! Congrats to you Katherine,
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Date: 11/28/2010 4:53:00 PM
How fun to read, especially the last one sitting at Ihops. I like how you brought in all the popular store names. Congratations, Katherine. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/28/2010 2:25:00 PM
Congratulations on the win for this excellent entry to the contest, katherine
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Date: 11/28/2010 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/28/2010 12:00:00 PM
ladies ~ gentlemen ~ start those ...... engines...k- mart ~ wal - mart ~ target ~ pennys...let's ~ all ~ hop ~ on ~ over ~ to ~ I - hop. Looks like you made the complete round, Katherine. Smile! How does the bank book look. Lol. "Congratulations" on a worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/28/2010 7:26:00 AM
LOL People who shop at 5 a.m. seldom wear grins, Katherine! Very good poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/26/2010 7:50:00 PM
once again excellent my friend
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Date: 11/21/2010 1:09:00 PM
Excellent and energizing write Katherine my friend.. enjoyed so much ..good luck int he contest.. nice presentation as well luv.. have a Happy Thanksgiving luv..
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:22:00 AM
What a meaningful and realistic write on the present day celebration of Holidays, katherine
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:36:00 AM
yeah right.
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:49:00 AM
had a great rib-tickling time with this clever, humurous work.. just came from the flea market---shopaholic!! best of luck in the contest! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:11:00 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest with this witty poem, Katherine. Hope you are all set for a great holiday season! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:12:00 AM
Thats the part I hate, which is why we are shopping today..lol enjoyed our entry..best of luck in the contest ...always Michael
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