Katherine Stella Poet Limerick

Black Friday

<                     ladies ~ gentlemen ~ start those ...... engines
                         miss  ~ Ho ~ down - prices .... would be a sin
                                        best buy - circuit city
                                   black ~ friday .... how pitty
                        5 am ~ now ~ who ~ wears ~ smiling ... grins 





                          k- mart ~ wal - mart ~ target ~ pennys
                              red tag sales of many and plenty
                                 but you must buy in bulks
                        and ~  get ~ guy ~ like ~ the ... hulk
                to ~ push ~ cart ~ while ~ you ~ chat ~ with ... jenny




                         let's ~ all ~  hop ~ on ~ over ~ to ~ I - hop
                         your one stop for christmas breakfast slop
                                sure pancakes sounds yummy
                                     but wait till hits tummy 
                                 be sitting on stool till it plops




Entry For
Carolyn Devonshire's
Commericialized Holiday Humor Contest
Gl All And Happy Holidays
Love Kathy & Jenny

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

James Fraser November 29, 2010 at 1:59 PM Many congratulations on your win Katherine, in Carolyn's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James

Audrey Haick November 29, 2010 at 12:33 PM Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest, Katherine! Love, Audrey

Carol Sunshine Brown November 29, 2010 at 5:40 AM Congratulations Katherine on your win in the "Commercialized Holiday Humor" contest sponsored by Carolyn Devonshire. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson November 28, 2010 at 10:11 PM Very funny and sad. congratulations on your win. Loe, Joyce

Robert A. Dufresne November 28, 2010 at 5:02 PM And so it is christmas.....wish they had a treble cleff on this keyboard! Congrats to you Katherine,

Andrea Dietrich November 28, 2010 at 4:53 PM How fun to read, especially the last one sitting at Ihops. I like how you brought in all the popular store names. Congratations, Katherine. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta November 28, 2010 at 2:25 PM Congratulations on the win for this excellent entry to the contest, katherine

Sara Kendrick November 28, 2010 at 1:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

John Freeman November 28, 2010 at 12:00 PM ladies ~ gentlemen ~ start those ...... engines...k- mart ~ wal - mart ~ target ~ pennys...let's ~ all ~ hop ~ on ~ over ~ to ~ I - hop. Looks like you made the complete round, Katherine. Smile! How does the bank book look. Lol. "Congratulations" on a worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire November 28, 2010 at 7:26 AM LOL People who shop at 5 a.m. seldom wear grins, Katherine! Very good poem. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Duncan Chappell November 26, 2010 at 7:50 PM once again excellent my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 21, 2010 at 1:09 PM Excellent and energizing write Katherine my friend.. enjoyed so much ..good luck int he contest.. nice presentation as well luv.. have a Happy Thanksgiving luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta November 21, 2010 at 9:22 AM What a meaningful and realistic write on the present day celebration of Holidays, katherine

John Loving Iii November 21, 2010 at 5:36 AM yeah right.

Nette Onclaud November 20, 2010 at 10:49 AM had a great rib-tickling time with this clever, humurous work.. just came from the flea market---shopaholic!! best of luck in the contest! warmest, nette

Carolyn Devonshire November 20, 2010 at 9:11 AM :) Thanks for supporting the contest with this witty poem, Katherine. Hope you are all set for a great holiday season! Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico November 20, 2010 at 8:12 AM Thats the part I hate, which is why we are shopping today..lol enjoyed our entry..best of luck in the contest ...always Michael