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Black Diamonds

The mining towns are shadows now just memory's of lost miners dreams. The empty shops and for sale signs reflect the closing of the mine. The corporate spreadsheet spoke and people's lives it wrecked. To make the share holders rich and to break the unions grip. From cupboards full to food bank queue's the change is hard to take . As they stand in job centres looking at minimum wage jobs flipping burgers or answering calls 100 feet below their feet lay black diamonds in the ground comp entry 09082016 Diamonds and coal are both, at their base, different forms of the element carbon (C on the periodic table). And yes, pressure is a key part of what turns decaying carbon-based life forms such as plants into coal, as well as what turns carbon into diamonds.

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Date: 8/17/2016 2:58:00 PM
Good take on black diamonds. I lived in Wales for a long time and Margaret Thatcher is still haunting from the grave...
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/17/2016 3:03:00 PM
in the news again lately with orgrave and what the police got up to same force as hillsbourgh it gave me the idea as we still use coal just import it , done to break the unions , evil woman
Date: 8/16/2016 8:40:00 AM
Congrats well done x
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/16/2016 1:48:00 PM
many thanks wendy
Date: 8/16/2016 7:43:00 AM
Congrats Stephen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/16/2016 1:48:00 PM
cheers teddy for stopping by
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/16/2016 1:48:00 PM
cheers teddy for stopping by
Date: 8/16/2016 7:41:00 AM
Congrats Stephen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 8/13/2016 10:01:00 AM
Congrats well written xxx
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/13/2016 4:23:00 PM
many thanks for stopping by stephen
Date: 8/13/2016 1:31:00 AM
for me this was one of the better poems on this list. Congrats on the winners' list.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/13/2016 2:06:00 AM
many thanks always good to get a comment of no1 poet stephen
Date: 8/12/2016 6:36:00 PM
Congratulations Stephen on the placement of the contest
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/13/2016 2:05:00 AM
thank you great comp cheers
Date: 8/12/2016 5:13:00 PM
Dropping back with congrats Stephen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/12/2016 5:27:00 PM
cheers jan you spotted it
Date: 8/12/2016 4:57:00 PM
Hi Stephen , Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/12/2016 5:28:00 PM
thank you , thought it matched the comp and a bee in my bonnet
Date: 8/9/2016 3:54:00 PM
heartbreakingly sad imagery Stephen - great take on the black diamonds theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/9/2016 3:41:00 PM
Great writing for this challenge, Stephen. DId you write of this topic in another poem ? I could swear I had read one similar to it earlier.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/9/2016 3:53:00 PM
Your right the miners strike is in my mind at the moment the in jusice they suffered well spotted stephen
Date: 8/9/2016 9:20:00 AM
Very interesting take on the topic Stephen, G/L in the contest!:)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/9/2016 9:39:00 AM
lol I do tend to go off on one and collecting na but we shall see thank you for reading my poem stephen always known coal as black diamonds
Date: 8/9/2016 4:36:00 AM
Hi, Stephen. Just thought I would drop by and pay my regards. Enjoyed the read! All the very best - Cheers! :) john
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 8/9/2016 5:28:00 AM
many thanks john , thought it was an unusual approach to black diamonds

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