Black Diamonds

The mining towns are shadows now
just memory's of lost miners dreams.
The empty shops and for sale signs
reflect the closing of the mine.
The corporate spreadsheet spoke
and people's lives it wrecked.
To make the share holders rich
and to break the unions grip.
From cupboards full to food bank queue's
the change is hard to take .
As they stand in job centres
looking at  minimum wage jobs 
flipping burgers or answering calls
100 feet below their feet 
lay black diamonds in the ground


comp entry 09082016  


Diamonds and coal are both, at their base, different forms of the element carbon (C on the periodic table). And yes, pressure is a key part of what turns decaying carbon-based life forms such as plants into coal, as well as what turns carbon into diamonds.
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Neumann Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 2:58 PM
Good take on black diamonds. I lived in Wales for a long time and Margaret Thatcher is still haunting from the grave...
Pennell  Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 3:03 PM
in the news again lately with orgrave and what the police got up to same force as hillsbourgh it gave me the idea as we still use coal just import it , done to break the unions , evil woman
Rycroft Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 8:40 AM
Congrats well done x
Pennell  Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:48 PM
many thanks wendy
Kimathi Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Congrats Stephen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Pennell  Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:48 PM
cheers teddy for stopping by
Pennell  Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 1:48 PM
cheers teddy for stopping by
Kimathi Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Congrats Stephen, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Rycroft Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 10:01 AM
Congrats well written xxx
Pennell  Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:23 PM
many thanks for stopping by stephen
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:31 AM
for me this was one of the better poems on this list. Congrats on the winners' list.
Pennell  Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:06 AM
many thanks always good to get a comment of no1 poet stephen
Negron Flores Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Congratulations Stephen on the placement of the contest
Pennell  Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:05 AM
thank you great comp cheers
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Dropping back with congrats Stephen:-) hugs Jan xx
Pennell  Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 5:27 PM
cheers jan you spotted it
Y. Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Hi Stephen , Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Pennell  Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 5:28 PM
thank you , thought it matched the comp and a bee in my bonnet
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 3:54 PM
heartbreakingly sad imagery Stephen - great take on the black diamonds theme - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 3:41 PM
Great writing for this challenge, Stephen. DId you write of this topic in another poem ? I could swear I had read one similar to it earlier.
Pennell  Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Your right the miners strike is in my mind at the moment the in jusice they suffered well spotted stephen
Hoffman Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 9:20 AM
Very interesting take on the topic Stephen, G/L in the contest!:)
Pennell  Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 9:39 AM
lol I do tend to go off on one and collecting na but we shall see thank you for reading my poem stephen always known coal as black diamonds
Fleming Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 4:36 AM
Hi, Stephen. Just thought I would drop by and pay my regards. Enjoyed the read! All the very best - Cheers! :) john
Pennell  Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 5:28 AM
many thanks john , thought it was an unusual approach to black diamonds
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