Black Diamond Night

Black Diamond Night

Life is a cruel wench, a beckoning tramp, she is.
 Sprawling wide open to draw us into her erotic nectar.
 She whispers lurid words which promise to forestall
 The imminent erosion, of illusionary perfection.

The promise of a tomorrow? Few have the inherent structure,
 To challenge her guile, humming quiet, sweet victory.
 Only the ancient one, who hides beneath our vision,
When wrenched from the rock, is still perfect in her imperfection.

Dawn loses its battle to dusk, and returns again to be defeated
 In an endless, biblical battle. The waves wash up on the shore
Wrenching the sands from pounded beaches; only to spew up
 Again and be dumped ashore by the evenings rushing tides.

I lie on my back, on a beach, gazing up at dark stars,
On this black diamond night, sadly, wiser.

Brenda  Molmod  Atry  8/14/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Vincent Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 4:16 AM
Congratulations Brenda on featuring among the poets of the week. This piece is surely worth it.
Smith Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:27 AM
Just discovered your talent. Congratulations Brenda on being featured...
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June 2, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Very nice, evokative... Terry
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January 8, 2013 at 1:00 AM
Wonderful write!
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January 1, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Brenda , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. pd
Guzzi Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 4:37 PM
so gald to see you peeking in! Hope you are well and happy and have a great family hoiday! [soup mail] Light & Love
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September 10, 2012 at 2:07 PM
A pleasure to visit and read your poems Brenda. You write very well. Have a wonderful new week. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 11:00 AM
An awesome write and nice imagery on this poem. love phyl
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September 10, 2012 at 10:51 AM
An impressive write, Brenda! Fantastic imagery and use of personification! Was this entered in the black diamond night contest? I'm surprised it's not on the winners list. Enjoyed the read this afternoon...hugs, Rhonda
Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Life is a bastard son proding the fertile horizon/ poking into places tender, tearing the wide open expanse of delta dawn/ he taunts, ruse and bellicous, so full of himself/ spewing into the weakest streams the yin dreams/ Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2012 at 6:22 PM
Thank you for the inspiration my muse..please read Bastard Son
Bordner Avatar
August 18, 2012 at 12:31 PM
I am so glad that you are not in jail or something! I missed you - This " ancient one..." sounds Messianic - Maybe twilight surrenders to to the dawn? Once more Brenda, you have tuned the chords of my soul's awareness, thanks - Life is a rapacious beast, but it also gives - J.A.B. %
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