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Black Diamond

I want to tell a story of a girl by the name of Diamond. As a child she was often made fun of ,by the neighborhood kids. Because she was really skinny and she wore huge glasses. They made fun of her ebony skin as well. If it wasn't for loving parents it would have crushed her soul. Her parents often told her that she was beautiful. She remembers her moma's words to this day"It aint what they call you it's what you answer to".But once she went through that awkward phase, She grew into a beautiful woman. Diamond became a famous model,and nolonger a diamond in the rough. 08-10-16 For the Black Diamond contest Sponsor:Nayda Ivette Negron Third Place

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Date: 12/18/2018 8:42:00 PM
That is an awesome poem Alexis, Beauty is in your heart my friend always remember that!
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Date: 8/16/2016 8:37:00 AM
Congrats well done x
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Date: 8/13/2016 1:49:00 PM
CONGRATS!!! my friend Alexis...on your win...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/13/2016 9:55:00 AM
Congrats on this beautiful story well done great theme xxx
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Date: 8/13/2016 6:01:00 AM
Different take:) Congratulations on you win with this wonderful write, Alexis:)
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Date: 8/13/2016 3:33:00 AM
Alexis! I love this and prose is one of my favorite forms. You wrote it very well and touched me deeply. congrats on your placement lovely lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/12/2016 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations Alexis on the placement of the contest
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Date: 8/12/2016 4:17:00 PM
Dropping back with congrats Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/12/2016 11:15:00 AM
A very good poem theme well done well written x Different but a great poem x
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Date: 8/11/2016 3:37:00 PM
Hi Alexis, an excellent write. Mommas words were very wise. It is sad that anyone has to go through this but they do. It can help make you stronger in the end and if you have wise parents alongside you, you can come through it. This has to be a seven. Excellent story poem. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/11/2016 12:51:00 PM
Fortunately your 'diamond' had parents who helped her through a bad period, and eventually she turned into a real 'diamond'! I found Moma's words very wise! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 8/10/2016 9:55:00 PM
I love this story you came up with!!! A BIG seven to you.
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Date: 8/10/2016 10:02:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm glad you liked the story. I appreciate that you support my art. Thanks for the high mark:-) Alexis
Date: 8/10/2016 4:07:00 PM
Wonderful story..I enjoyed reading it today..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2016 2:46:00 PM
So inspiring, a wonderful piece with great heart...the "momma's words" line is incredibly poignant writing. A positive, empowering write that is a pleasure to read. my best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
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Date: 8/10/2016 11:39:00 AM
The ugly duckling turning into the beautiful swan. I love her mom's advice "It aint what they call you it's what you answer to"....lovely story
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Date: 8/10/2016 11:37:00 AM
LOVE your unique take on the black diamond theme - it has such a lovely uplifting ending:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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