Black Diamond

I want to tell a story of a girl by
the name of Diamond. 
As a child she was often made
fun of ,by the neighborhood kids.
Because she was really skinny
and she wore huge glasses.
They made fun of her ebony
skin as well.
If it wasn't for loving parents
it would have crushed her soul.
Her parents often told her that 
she was beautiful.
She remembers her moma's
words to this day"It aint what 
they call you it's what you answer 
to".But once she went through
that awkward phase,
She grew into a beautiful woman.
Diamond became a famous
model,and nolonger a diamond
in the rough.



08-10-16

For the Black Diamond contest 
Sponsor:Nayda Ivette Negron
Third Place
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May Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 8:42 PM
That is an awesome poem Alexis, Beauty is in your heart my friend always remember that!
Rycroft Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Congrats well done x
Warrior Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 1:49 PM
CONGRATS!!! my friend Alexis...on your win...god bless...^WW^
Rycroft Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 9:55 AM
Congrats on this beautiful story well done great theme xxx
Daniel Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 6:01 AM
Different take:) Congratulations on you win with this wonderful write, Alexis:)
Scars Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:33 AM
Alexis! I love this and prose is one of my favorite forms. You wrote it very well and touched me deeply. congrats on your placement lovely lady! :)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations Alexis on the placement of the contest
Allison Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 4:17 PM
Dropping back with congrats Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 11:15 AM
A very good poem theme well done well written x Different but a great poem x
Raven Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 3:37 PM
Hi Alexis, an excellent write. Mommas words were very wise. It is sad that anyone has to go through this but they do. It can help make you stronger in the end and if you have wise parents alongside you, you can come through it. This has to be a seven. Excellent story poem. Hugs....Mike. XX
Callus Avatar
August 11, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Fortunately your 'diamond' had parents who helped her through a bad period, and eventually she turned into a real 'diamond'! I found Moma's words very wise! ~ Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 9:55 PM
I love this story you came up with!!! A BIG seven to you.
Y. Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 10:02 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm glad you liked the story. I appreciate that you support my art. Thanks for the high mark:-) Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Wonderful story..I enjoyed reading it today..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Marie Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 2:46 PM
So inspiring, a wonderful piece with great heart...the "momma's words" line is incredibly poignant writing. A positive, empowering write that is a pleasure to read. my best to you in the contest. blessings, lynn
Smith Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:39 AM
The ugly duckling turning into the beautiful swan. I love her mom's advice "It aint what they call you it's what you answer to"....lovely story
Allison Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 11:37 AM
LOVE your unique take on the black diamond theme - it has such a lovely uplifting ending:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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