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Black Crowes In the Snow

Is there a difference In January Between a crow And his shadow? Lurching in flight, so slow And low Threading The snow-glued birch trees That stand, Wound in wind Like barber shop poles, The crow’s Shadow Glancing The pearly floor Below As oily-black As his own feathers Ruffled upon his back, Married Like a yoyo To the unusual sun Strung To the Earth, Landing Upon himself, Claw To neck As if he was his own prey Cheek to cheek In black dance, Uniting Like a charred spoon Scooped Into the cream of the snow In search of berries Buried At the bottom of the bowl Then Up The crow Separates Again Skating above and upon The glimmering winter forest floor, The real bird, His beak, Stained red from is juicy feast.

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Date: 4/14/2018 4:13:00 PM
How absolutely mouth-watering and beautiful this poem is and will remain forever. Now I fully understand why crows are so hauntingly profound in life and in stories. The story here in this case is perfect and the crow, perfect in his imperfections.
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Robert Trezise Jr.
Date: 4/15/2018 7:44:00 AM
Leanne you're so kind, and the crow knows you well :) Thanks!
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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton
Date: 4/14/2018 4:22:00 PM
I was going to list which words impressed me most, I couldn't make up my mind...they're pure genious. I love crows, the use of colour stunning. All senses open to this poem. In my favourites.

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