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Black clothes

Black clothes. Shadowy souls, monotonous sounds. Getting late. Patience has blackened out.. I stubbornly wait. Left my attitude behind. Humble, not blasphemous. Victim of my mercy. Black clothes. Shivering glances and their colours dark. Getting late. Time has blackened out. I savor the feelings of urge. Left my intentions behind. Challenger of my own decay, yet not a nihilist of the others. Black clothes. Poems the cracks, titles the rapists. Getting late. Hallucinations have blackened out. I ruined with tears. Left my motives behind. Comedian, not played out, parasitic entity of my mind. Black clothes in altar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/31/2016 11:20:00 AM
Nicely done
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Miltos Gitas
Date: 7/31/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you very much...
Date: 7/30/2016 3:59:00 PM
Reminds me of Johney Cash and Hank Willaims too. It seems melodic and smooth.
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Date: 7/30/2016 4:32:00 PM
Great pleasure for me your words. Thank you very much...
Date: 7/30/2016 11:11:00 AM
Wow, this is a deep statement ... glad to read. Skat
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Date: 7/30/2016 4:30:00 PM
There is no nicer feeling than like a poem you have written with such love. Thank you for your beautiful words ...
Date: 7/30/2016 10:29:00 AM
I really like that. Such a stream of consciousness and room for interpretation or room for simply letting your poem touch...
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Date: 7/30/2016 10:42:00 AM
Really thank you very much. It is an allegorical poem that I wrote several years ago wanting to describe my mood or even better me.