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Black Bird On a Wire

Black Bird Sitting on a wire Why is your back turned towards me? Do you wish to hide the intelligence of your eyes, or do you wish to create some mystery? I have seen you Here at this old dump Picking through the unwanted wanted things I wish I could search along with you Check out what the Jones's have no more use for The bits of unfixed The not new enough Their "I think we deserve the very best" "This ain't good enough, let's buy more and more stuff!" At one time I wore their discarded clothes Wore them without pride I should have been proud For I dug for them with wanting hands Hands that waded through decadence Refillable Recyclable Usable Black Bird I watched you and your brothers As you feasted on our last suppers Ripping open black bags Fighting for morsels Unconcerned with the rotting Intoxicated by fermenting fruit Pungent aromas Bones that needed to be picked clean Me noticing but not recalling until now Back then I was hoping Praying for a bicycle Desperately wanting to ride far away from here Escape my then My embarrassment My, I hope no one sees me! "Garbage picker!" "Where did you get that coat?" "We threw that in the dump!" Boy oh boy do I like clothes now. No one makes fun of what I wear! Part of me wishes to return with you Black Bird To see what I left behind Reclaim Recycle that little boy But I can't The dumps aren't open anymore It is like those old bones Bleached Picked clean Manicured Items placed in appropriate piles All the while You sit on your wire Back turned to me Intelligent eyes hidden Knowing I can't disturb you In a while you will feed on yesterday For this place Is not closed to you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/14/2015 11:26:00 AM
Great poem with imagery, I love it!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/14/2015 1:39:00 PM
Thanks Rainbow, I appreciate you looking it up. This one was a journey into my past.
Date: 7/29/2015 2:18:00 PM
A very meaningfully and intelligently written poem ......i loved it:-) several emotions are interlaced connecting it to a black bird!!! Too good Richard Lamoureux!!! Love, Anulaxmi:-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thanks for the thoughtful words. Drop by any time for a visit.
Date: 7/6/2015 11:42:00 AM
It's easy to see why this poem won! It is wonderfully nostalgic and bittersweet. Congratulations!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/30/2015 9:18:00 AM
Thanks so much Janice.
Date: 7/6/2015 9:08:00 AM
So proud of you for your fine win, Richard. :) SO very proud! Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/6/2015 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, this is poem means a lot to me. Hugs back to you.
Date: 7/5/2015 9:17:00 AM
Congrats Rick! Humbled and honored to have my poem with your superb one on the winning list! hugs
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Date: 7/5/2015 3:10:00 AM
Congratulations Richard :) LINDA
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Date: 7/4/2015 11:55:00 PM
Great creative write Richard! Congrats on awesome win!
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Date: 7/4/2015 7:43:00 PM
Richard :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)
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Date: 6/8/2015 6:52:00 PM
a most profound write Rick great stuff hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2015 7:48:00 PM
Thanks, this one holds a lot of meaning for me.
Date: 6/8/2015 3:27:00 AM
This is adorable and extremely cute. Your soul just diffused into mine to wonderfully correlate with your message. Great work friend and thanks a zillion for visiting my page. I hope to be able to attract more of your attention. Once again this is an awesome piece of creativity. selah!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/8/2015 7:30:00 AM
I'm surprised you found this one "adorable and extreamly cute" it is a rather serious and emotional piece. I do thank you though for reading it and commenting.
Date: 6/6/2015 8:11:00 PM
Very well done Richard and I'd say you're a thinking poet. Great train of thought empowering the muse and yes, many seem to get overloaded with yesterday's junk which can spill over into ones tomorrow and thus stalling life more or less. Thanks for sharing this amazing read.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2015 8:07:00 PM
Thanks Charles, much appreciated.
Date: 6/4/2015 1:38:00 PM
Gosh mate, that was quite some read. Love the use of the Jones's. That whole sense of the junk yard being full of yesterdays. Thought provoking stuff, well done.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/4/2015 9:45:00 PM
Thanks Scott.
Date: 6/3/2015 11:26:00 AM
Well done Richard. Manifesting a thinker's thought... Rated 7 for you unique way of expressing yourself! Empowerment achieved. Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2015 11:45:00 AM
You are kind Verlena, I appreciate your visits this morning.
Date: 6/2/2015 11:51:00 AM
A powerful and interesting write...And one that I can relate to...best wishes
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2015 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Joseph!
Date: 6/2/2015 7:20:00 AM
I once wrote a piece called the boutique on avenue A and if only I knew how to transfer document to poetry soup you could all read it on a piece of fabric I was famous to go through garbage and never sale my pussy it is for free and told cowboy the pimp to take a walk as he used to wear the hat do not mind my comment I just tell it as I see it
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Date: 6/1/2015 9:17:00 AM
another really special poem from you,,,you are so observant...nothing seems to escape your wondrous pen...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2015 9:27:00 AM
This one flowed from old memories. Thanks for showing appreciation for my story.
Date: 5/30/2015 7:33:00 PM
Oh Richard I do like this one, it reminds me so much of when my brothers and I were very young, we lived in the bush and often visited the rubbish tip, in fact all our bikes came from there, Dad put them all together for us, my brothers used to find old clocks and take them apart, it was fun, oh those were the days, take care..............Vera....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2015 9:30:00 AM
What a great comment, I am pleased to have both you and Peter read this one.
Date: 5/30/2015 2:20:00 AM
Woah relatable in a way! I have seen vagabonds rummage through the garbage truck and find real valuables. So i enjoyd this delightful freeverse poem and how the witty raven acts. Kudos! Great to read frm u again.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2015 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for coming back to read my work.
Date: 5/29/2015 3:36:00 PM
Wow...Richard...your poem gave me goosebumps. This is so powerful with emotions you've gathered from life and presented to us so magnificently through your silent conversation with the black bird. 7+Fav, Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2015 8:23:00 AM
Thanks Sandra, hugs Rick.
Date: 5/29/2015 12:19:00 PM
The black bird looking down upon the black sheep, beautiful poem!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2015 3:06:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 5/28/2015 3:31:00 PM
wow, what a very clever and thoughtful metaphor. You are such a deep thinker with a way of putting it all together. GREAT poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I guess that would be better than a shallow thinker;0)*lol*
Date: 5/27/2015 10:47:00 PM
The blackbirds are creatures we made, feasting on the decadence and waste we pride ourselves in being able to create. I see obits of wealthy people leaving millions to a family pet(s)--when there are kids dying of disease , poverty, etc that never enter their minds to give to. Humans first is my motto. We have souls. Fantastic poem. A7..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2015 8:04:00 AM
So true! Thanks for commenting Robert.
Date: 5/27/2015 6:45:00 PM
I almost missed seeing this magnificent poem, Richard! Such depth of feeling, painting an amazing picture of overcoming the hardships of life! A 7!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2015 8:05:00 AM
Thanks Laura, all things worked out in the end.
Date: 5/27/2015 1:08:00 PM
An intriguing piece with its title. Once again , you have shown your mastery and deep perception on human nature. I feel that whenever I visit your page, I get to peek at the inner workings of man which you can pick and rip open for all to see. Great work!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2015 4:02:00 PM
What a great reaction, thanks Kim.
Date: 5/27/2015 8:57:00 AM
Richard, oh my, this is beyond magnificent, such depth and emotion in each well chosen word, it made me weep, and that black bird, yes they are intelligent, your descriptions are magical, well for me this over the top 7+++++++ I love it!!!! and thanks for visiting my poem, its summer . . . I am working on something today, I hope you will like
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/27/2015 4:04:00 PM
Thanks, I am moved by your response! Hugs Rick.
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