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Black-Rain

*BLACK~RAIN* **My wedding day** *********************** my finest moment washed away with white satin nightmare from heaven **Bleeding Love** ******************** dreams never revealed swimming in a pool of blood dark clouds forever **Eclipse with tears** ************************ Dark Crystal Lightning blue skies, deep watercolors over the rainbow **Gods Punishment** ************************* useless way of life 40 days and 40 nights grave yard promises by;p.d.

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Skat A

Date: 2/4/2016 11:07:00 PM

go away rain **SKAT**

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/12/2014 12:14:00 AM

just giftedly sifting through some of your mothuh truckin old sKool Shitake. Imma fool for yir Haiku! YO.

Robin Davis

Date: 4/3/2014 7:33:00 PM

PD These are some interesting and emotional little poems. Each one has its own feelings in it for the reader to grasp. Thank you for the nice comment on my Umbrella poem.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2013 11:51:00 PM

PD. I don't mind if you put my poem low on your list. I didn't realize I had not followed any rule. anyway, I hope you are having a good week. I really love my time off work and am dreading going back to work!!

Cheryl Aldea

Date: 8/26/2011 10:44:00 PM

this is nice! awesome haikus. keep on sharing. regards, cheryl

Nisath Jahan Laboni

Date: 5/14/2011 1:33:00 PM

I like it..

James Fraser

Date: 5/8/2011 8:00:00 AM

Pow-er-ful writing crammed with emotion pd, just terrific....:) smiles 4 u

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/7/2011 10:45:00 AM

just dropping by to say hi (& good night, magandang gabi) pzztop-- can I still call you that? I searched them up :) & so did you do any lumba lumba watching today? hmmm :) well I hope your day's been good-- it finally rained here today-- do you know that rain here is called ulan? anyway kamusta (sounds so much like como esta?) hope I spelled that right? see you around ok? you now me I am a mushroom starting soon -- :)

Dinda Minardi

Date: 5/2/2011 9:10:00 AM

I like the bleeding love :)

Anne Rutherford

Date: 4/29/2011 6:20:00 AM

DP. you have a way with haiku poems.My favourite is Eclipse with Tears . good writing here . Anne

Matt Hunt

Date: 4/27/2011 12:58:00 AM

I enjoyed these very much as well, especially "God's Punishment" It was very deep if only a few syllables:D Wonderful.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/25/2011 2:53:00 PM

I love your comments and love how you always get my writes... Hope your doing well love... missed you xoox

Judy Konos

Date: 3/19/2011 1:19:00 PM

Your titles even tell a story, "MY WEDDING DAY, BLEEDING LOVE, ECLIPSE WITH TEARS, GODS PUNISHMENT"!

Chelsea Stufleben

Date: 2/28/2011 12:12:00 PM

I love this:D stunning work:)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/21/2011 12:32:00 PM

hey missy pd! where have you been again??? how are you scooby doo??

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2011 10:50:00 PM

Nice set of haiku which individually deliver great descriptiveness. This is impressive material.

Heather Miles

Date: 2/1/2011 12:23:00 PM

awesome haikus! i love it!

Abe Lopez

Date: 1/28/2011 8:50:00 AM

Nice series of writes.... good to hear from you!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/25/2011 8:10:00 AM

no new writes, pd? well I hope you post new ones soon :) just saying hi :) and thanks for all your comments -- haha I commented over at your blog-- and me?? guilty??/ who's sounding guilty?? lol!! haha if you must know I sweated over that limerick, lol :D thanks again :)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 1/24/2011 6:58:00 PM

Amazingly beautiful Haiku series. Wonderful write my friend. If it is for a contest my good wishes for your entry. I have placed a new Poem' When One Sing a Song or Dance'. To appreciate it properly, please view the Photo Poem URL given on my face book. Love and best wishes...Ravindra...Poet D.

Julie Heckman

Date: 1/23/2011 7:59:00 AM

nice work I love ready haiku from an modern american point of view. Thanks Julie

Deb Radke

Date: 1/20/2011 6:46:00 AM

Wonderful. Just wonderful writing. Everything a haiku should be. My best, Deb

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2011 5:34:00 AM

Hey PD my BFF .. good to see your comments always... after my "SPICY" contest am taking a break in contest land... so much going on ... not enough time in a day .... appreciate your encouraging words of friendship and luv... your BFF for life...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/17/2011 11:20:00 PM

P.D i'd give anything for any type of rain at the moment, 100 degrees everyday for weeks now, the east of australia in floods, us in the west nothing. any how i digress, you are a brilliant poet, miss destroyer. Harry

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 10:56:00 AM

Good afternoon, p.d. wonderful Haikus! Thanks for the congratulations. lol I'm sure it was very genuine..from your heart, but mine didn't place just as was expected..Regardless, it sure was fun! Always, Annalise