Debbie Guzzi Poet Haiku

---Bittersweet Vine

bittersweet vine
twist like pipe curls on a finger
blue birds sings

bird song arias
wake the sun-soaked cat napping
feathers fly

down laced twigs
incubate the Robin’s blue eggs
puss licks his whiskers

lofted sparrow hawk
warm basket of new born kittens
noon whistle

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Poet Destroyer A December 7, 2012 at 3:46 PM wow...super blessed and beautiful..pd

Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 6:22 AM Congratulations Debbie, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol

Elaine George February 20, 2011 at 7:10 PM WOW! Sensational string Haiku, Deb. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Robert Pettit February 15, 2011 at 3:56 PM I knew Charles would pick your entry in the contest. Congratulations on your win.

Deb Radke February 15, 2011 at 3:44 PM Oh, well done indeed. The last line is perfection. Congratulations! Love, Deb

Carolyn Devonshire February 15, 2011 at 12:09 PM Lovely images, Deb. Congratulations on your win in the string contest! Love, Carolyn

Eiken Laan February 15, 2011 at 8:41 AM Beautiful images, well deserved win Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2011 at 10:33 PM this one was so filled with wonderful images. I just loved it . A big congratulations for your well deserved win, Deb!

Nette Onclaud February 14, 2011 at 9:59 PM wowing me with your neo-classic piece on naturem debs!! THUMBS UP for the win.. :) huggs, nette

Barbara Gorelick February 14, 2011 at 8:47 PM I think this one is my favorite..love the very last one. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 14, 2011 at 7:41 PM Congrats Debbie on your super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty luv.. enjoy...

Kash Poet February 14, 2011 at 5:58 PM Wonderful string of haikus here!Congrats Debbie on your well deserved win in this contest of Charles.

Carrie Richards February 14, 2011 at 4:50 PM Each one a beauty.....terrific images each leaves with me. (Love the noon whistle...such a surprise element!!!!) Congratulations on a well deserved win!!

Joyce Johnson February 14, 2011 at 4:33 PM Congratulations on your win with this fine entry. Love, Joyce

Trudy Diane Rider February 4, 2011 at 10:51 AM Karma? LOL very well done! I love this! ~Trudy~

James Marshall Goff February 3, 2011 at 3:26 PM well done again....the Sparrow Hawk is a regular sighting of mine on my rural "birdwatching" jaunts....lovely...jimbo

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 3, 2011 at 2:32 AM You sure got some gems here, Debbie! I really like your first one here, it just comes alive for me, the imagery you used here-- enjoyed reading all of them--wish you the best in the contest :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2011 at 11:11 PM wow, great title, great poems!! Yours is awesome, DEb,particularly that third one.Naughty naughty puss! Luv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A February 2, 2011 at 5:36 PM a lovley image your haiku brings, enjoyed this one Debbie,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi February 2, 2011 at 7:10 AM I think the hawk is thinking of kitten food?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 2, 2011 at 6:08 AM Lovely string Haiku Debbie..good luck in Charles's contest .. your title is very interesting to the eye luv..

David Byrne February 1, 2011 at 11:38 PM really liked this one

Nette Onclaud February 1, 2011 at 11:20 PM such attention to detail with some lovely abstract tones.. i love the eclectic feel of this, lights!! winner..:) huggs, nette

Robert Pettit February 1, 2011 at 5:58 PM Nice set of haiku. I just caught an error in my work with "Roseville Sweetheart". Somehow, I missed typing in "you" in the last line.

Charles Henderson February 1, 2011 at 5:37 PM Well if you were a mind to use this one I would just use "Bittersweet Vine". The title is just for the sake of having one and I don't like an additional 6 or 8 syllables influencing the poem. Chas

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