Bitter Only

It was so long ago
true love I thought I knew
and it was lovely as a ruby rose.
Like Romeo and Juliet were we,
pledging our love forevermore.

But can a rose stay fresh and lovely
even when the weather 
continues bringing sun and rain?
And can the sweetest day
stay shining with no nightfall -
except in one’s memory?
Like a lovely rose, you vanished.
Unlike the rose, however,
you didn’t simply fade away.
Instead, you ran from me,
and unlike the sweetest day,
you did not even leave me with
 a twilight to gaze upon
as you fled away.

We’d called it a forever love,
but now I know
it was a withered rose
before it even started.
You vanished like the sweetest day,
but bitter only
is my memory of you.

October 19, 2022
for JCB Brul's Inspired By A Song - Once There Was A Love Poetry Contest

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Date: 10/22/2022 4:14:00 AM
A superb smooth-flowing free verse that showcases your innate talent, Andrea. Best of luck in contest Howard
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Date: 10/21/2022 9:54:00 PM
Image rich piece that is fill with a journey of life lessons. Nice read
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Date: 10/21/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thoughtful about past fervour, and reality.' Much I can emphasize with here Andrea.'
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Date: 10/21/2022 4:22:00 AM
Yea, like there were no thorns obvious. I have a garden of my own. Which I love dearly. But seriously, I know the pain. It is death at the time. Excellent write!
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Date: 10/20/2022 5:47:00 PM
A sad romantic poem but my favourite kind. Guess I have a romantic heart. AWESOME my friend. love phyo
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Date: 10/20/2022 3:51:00 PM
Well... I don't know. I don't see Andrea in this!
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Abdul Malik
Date: 10/20/2022 7:06:00 PM
I had placed you at such a high notch that I am compelled to say something when i don't see you there. Sorry!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/20/2022 5:20:00 PM
I have a registered poetic license. Haha
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/20/2022 5:19:00 PM
Hmmm were you peeking at a comment I made below?
Date: 10/20/2022 6:05:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sad that some people go through this but if they loved once they can love again and maybe next time it will be forever. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Pippi is adjusting. I took her to the vet to see if she is in good health and he seemed to think so. She did have an eye infection. I have to use drops twice daily until they are gone. Her eye already looks better. soupmail. Sara
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Date: 10/19/2022 11:41:00 PM
Oh this makes me smile, Andrea, the poetry does come across, as a nostalgic Shakespearean era one sided love affair. Your talent knows no boundaries my dear. Favourite for me.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/20/2022 12:49:00 PM
thanks for that, harry.
Date: 10/19/2022 11:05:00 PM
A sad poem but somehow my favourite subject. Lost love is always appreciated even if lost.
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Date: 10/19/2022 8:12:00 PM
Well-written piece, Andrea. I will never understand how young romance can be so fragile, especially when so ardently expressed. BOL in the contest.
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Date: 10/19/2022 6:58:00 PM
Andrea this heartfelt piece is written form someone that experienced a great loss love and disappointment in their life. I too suffer from this sad happening. Never to be the same and to remain in anguish until resolved. I feel for your tender heart in what you have written. A lost love can be devastating. When I wrote Goodbye it was what you conveyed in this favorite poetry for me. I also wrote A Lover's Torment is Awakened. Which is also how I felt. This Poem is one that I wouldn't be
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/20/2022 12:48:00 PM
It did not get a POTD, did it? It's mostly fabrication but I suppose there is a bit of my past in there!
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Michael Tor
Date: 10/19/2022 6:58:00 PM
surprised receives POTD. Wow!!!!Hugs. Really touched me Andrea...
Date: 10/19/2022 6:21:00 PM
It's important for people to be appreciative of their blessings and put them to good use. Andrea your writing is excellent and full of tender sentiment.
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Date: 10/19/2022 6:04:00 PM
Nice one, yours will be better received than my parody, lol. Enjoyed, Andrea
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