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A humerous scribble on the idioms Bite Your  Tongue/Tongue-in-cheek  to stop yourself from saying something that you would really like to say: I wanted to tell him/her exactly what I thought of him/her, but I had to bite my tongue. 

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You shouldn’t ‘ve said that, bite your tongue You said I look old, but you know I’m still young If ever a wiz a wiz there is ?? I’ll bite my tongue and feel its fizz You said I look fat, or something like that and that I’m a tired, bitter ol bat You know I’m a sweet young dainty thing I’m the morning glow you find in Spring You say that I’m just a crabby shrew Bite your tongue and shame on you! You know I display no angst or drama I have the kindly aura of the Dhali Lama You said I can’t write worth a dam I never said I could but now and then get in a slam! You call me an egotist, a narcissistic freak You must know my words have been tongue-n-cheek? You shouldn’t ‘ve said that, bite your tongue before you shoot hurtful words for fun My tongue is bigger as you can see I’ll pull its trigger like a gun then flee I may be too tall and you an elf It’s on the tip of my tongue… All that’s said reflects yourself In the end, the only thing that counts If there’s any love in you, any ounce We’ll bite our tongues and forgive the fuss, which drains the light from all of us It’s written in quotes, psalms and clichés Never your innate decency betray Follow your own worthy words search within and find someway

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Date: 11/29/2024 4:15:00 AM
Love the humor, Anaya. A delightfully fun read. Charlie :)
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Date: 11/29/2024 5:05:00 PM
Ty, Charlie! Good to see you back ~ Anaya
Date: 11/27/2024 4:53:00 PM
Anaya, there's a lot of wisdom in this fun-to-read poem. You're making me think that sometimes I should keep things to myself and sometimes not. Knowing when the right time to say something takes some very careful thought. Tact is not a bad thing at all. Smiles!
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:23:00 PM
There's humor everywhere, it was so much fun to let go and say silly things. Try it some time. Ty for all your time and smiles!
Date: 11/26/2024 10:33:00 AM
What a fun write. Enjoyed it right through. Appreciate love and forgiveness.
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Date: 11/26/2024 10:40:00 AM
Dear Victor, my poet friend. I'm delighted you get the message. I appreciate you! Hope my silly photo didn't offend you :):)
Date: 11/25/2024 6:32:00 PM
"In the end, the only thing that counts If there’s any love in you, any ounce We’ll bite our tongues and forgive the fuss, which drains the light from all of us" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/26/2024 9:49:00 AM
Ty Christuraj! I'm delighted you get the message, I appreciate you! Hope my silly photo didn't offend you :):)
Date: 11/25/2024 6:03:00 PM
Anaya I love your poem! You used your pen to defeat and indeed you took the high road forgiving! I couldn’t see your picture while judging but it is a fun hilarious touch! Congratulations on your placement in my contest! Thanks for entering!
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Date: 11/26/2024 9:48:00 AM
Ty, Karen! Ty for the placement, you are very kind to me. I tried to be humorous so glad you enjoyed and understand me! I enjoyed your contest, God bless ;)
Date: 11/23/2024 11:49:00 AM
Wise words of forgiveness and decency! Hugs
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Date: 11/23/2024 12:00:00 PM
Ty, Kim! Xhugs

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