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Bite Me!

There once was a fish named Jelly
He had poisonous goo in his belly
He came on land
And bit my hand
How that sucker hurt, Oh Nellie!

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Robin Davis

March 26, 2014 at 8:46 AM

Barbara Such a cute and silly write. Ouch. Yes, That would hurt.

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 19, 2010 at 8:14 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol

James Fraser

July 18, 2010 at 8:14 AM

Haha, Many congratulations Barbara on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

July 13, 2010 at 4:59 PM

Terrific, witty limerick, LNC. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 13, 2010 at 3:34 PM

Congrats Barb on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest with this great piece.. enjoy another biggie...with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

July 12, 2010 at 7:28 PM

Hey, I like this one too!!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

July 9, 2010 at 6:38 AM

Hi Barbara, I am going to try to start commenting again. I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do enjoy reading your wonderful poetry, though. This one is so FUNNY! I appreciate your talents and your comments on my work. Thanks for understanding. God be with you and keep up the excellent writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann