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Bite Me!

There once was a fish named Jelly He had poisonous goo in his belly He came on land And bit my hand How that sucker hurt, Oh Nellie!

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Robin Davis

Date: 3/26/2014 8:46:00 AM

Barbara Such a cute and silly write. Ouch. Yes, That would hurt.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/19/2010 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 7/18/2010 8:14:00 AM

Haha, Many congratulations Barbara on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 4:59:00 PM

Terrific, witty limerick, LNC. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2010 3:34:00 PM

Congrats Barb on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest with this great piece.. enjoy another biggie...with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2010 7:28:00 PM

Hey, I like this one too!!!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/9/2010 6:38:00 AM

Hi Barbara, I am going to try to start commenting again. I have just been too weepy these past three months…commenting became difficult. I do enjoy reading your wonderful poetry, though. This one is so FUNNY! I appreciate your talents and your comments on my work. Thanks for understanding. God be with you and keep up the excellent writing. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2010 11:47:00 PM

A wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck