Biscuits

Bake in an oven for, breakfast, lunch or dinner. Breathe in their aroma. Bring them to the table, break them open and then, butter them up real good. Best to eat them when hot. 8/7/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2016 9:22:00 PM

Love it!!! If I were guy, I could say, "I'm a son of a biscuit eater!"

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/23/2016 10:36:00 AM

Ha ha! Thank you, Andrea!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2016 11:26:00 PM

Yummy...my favorites I have had to give up. I grew up on every kind imaginable. I enjoyed your Pleiades Kim! Thank you for a fun contest! 7 ; )

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/24/2016 10:29:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. Glad you are enjoying the contests.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/20/2016 2:18:00 PM

This is a delightful poem, Kim, and the biscuits are very tempting, especially when they're served fresh from the oven! Regards // paul

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/24/2016 10:27:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. Wish I had one right now.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/16/2016 3:35:00 PM

Nice one, Kim, with lots of butter and jam. I need to give the contest a try. Hugs Eve

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/16/2016 5:38:00 AM

Tasty my dearest, Kim! A seven!

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:44:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/15/2016 10:26:00 PM

A 7 for this well-written piece, Kim! Give me one drowned in brown gravy! Janice

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:44:00 PM

Sure thing, Janice! That's for stopping by!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/15/2016 6:13:00 AM

Great and nice ... but the contemplated words of mine for the same purpose are now cold ... Okay ... Enjoyed reading ...

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:42:00 PM

Thank you, Probir!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/15/2016 4:45:00 AM

Tasty example,Kim:)

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:41:00 PM

Thanks, Jo!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2016 1:58:00 AM

Great example Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:41:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!

Phillip Garcia

Date: 8/14/2016 11:51:00 PM

This is great. Very smooth delivery. Ironically I just popped some croissants in the oven just before reading this. God must be saying something - what I have no idea. I'll chew on it

Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 3:40:00 PM

Ha ha! Thanks for stopping by, Phillip!